Hello Deej66,

Superb composition. Lyrics very gripping at the level of emotions. If he listens to you Dave must be proud of the friendship you have shown him. Your voice lends itself to this emotion that you want to share with us. The lead guitar is well done. I enjoyed it.

Kindly regard

DEro13
alias JaniJackFlash


Kindly regards
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash