Hi, Dan.

Nicely done - vocals sound excellent, and the style fits well.

I've learned the hard way that I should avoid speaking to the content of a song. But since the reason for the song seems to be to promote a sincere belief on your part, I'm going to make an exception here.

I find this song problematic. Not because it espouses your beliefs, but because it does it in a way that seems to denigrates others.

  • It mis-characterizes the theory of evolution.
  • Insults those who do believe the theory of evolution. A "humorous" insult is still an insult.
  • Fosters division by suggesting that people of faith and people of science belong to different clans.
  • Suggests that a creation story where God "reaches down", forms man "from the ground" and "breathed life" into man is far more believable than one that says "we come from monkeys".

Again, I find the song well done, both in construction and delivery. I just wish it made it didn't try to make some of its points at the expense of others.

Thanks!

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?