I like it!

The change up in vocals kept my interest.

Nice arrangement and lyrics make you want to listen to the story being told.

The spoken potions sounded fine to me, I liked the extra wetness.

I'm listening on some good studio headphones, had no problem understanding the lyrics, although I do agree they need to be de-mudded a bit.
My recommendation would be twofold:
On the main vocal, try cutting the EQ at or around 150 -250hz and/or boost around 100z.
Also, on the main vocal, try some compression with a slow attack and fast release time.

moto


Last edited by CaptainMoto; 03/09/21 06:08 AM.