Yes, much better, I can hear the drums now and the vocals sound great and sit perfectly in the mix.
It cuts off untidily at the end. Songs like this usually have the last big chord held until it fades away on its own so we can savour the fuzz, hums and feedback whistles!
You certainly pushed more loudness into it, but as Daniel says that's a personal preference, although rock music of this genre is generally maxed out as it adds oomph, so it sounds ok to me.

John


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