interesting lyrics/concept.
i like the intimate aspect.
just an idea; i think it would do a lot for the song if you doubled the vocs in some places eg "come on baby fight like a girl".
i also hear violins in some parts of the song.
just some ideas.
happiness/best.
om


New Song "PRETTY GIRL" for my wife...Dec 2023
(my vocs....mixed for good earbuds.)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs/prettygirlrbfinalcalfsongsdec2023mp3
(and rock song THE STALLION and bluegrass song... BANKER MAN....90 songs useing bb/rb.)