You're not spoiling the party at all, Marc! Honest critics is what I'm looking for! Thank you for taking the time to listen and to comment. I fully agree with you that this is not a song that needs (or has ) a vocal top performance in it.

The reasons I chose this song where:

A: It is a song that I can't use on my album (style and language), so it is "expendable"
B: The contest is about producing, so creativity in the production is way more importand than my vocals (or lyrics for that matter; I still don't know what the song is all about )

You find the instrumentation too busy. I have tried to make it sound "open" and not too crouded. To achieve that I have sent the piano player and the banjo player off the stage. But perhaps I should have left out even more...