I like your song and the lyrics say it all and still leave room for my own interpretation. I like that a lot.
The choice of instruments and the arrangement are also good, maybe a bit more variation wouldn't hurt.

What I'm not 100% happy with is Natalie's voice, I know from experience that fiddling with the 'gender' settings almost always makes Synth V singers sound worse.
If you want a darker voice, use a pitch changing plugin (I assume you're working in a DAW) that can change both pitch and formants, and only change the formants.
That sounds much better!

But other than that, your song is a good start into the world of synthetic singers smile


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