Originally Posted By: B.D.Thomas
Even though he's a bass player smile , I agree with Marty, I think your (good) choice of drums calls for more rhythmic variations of the bass.

And I think it would give the song more direction if you start with less instruments and build from there.

Thanks B.D. There is a rhythmic variation with the drums...a gallop in the choruses rather than straight notes. I will, however, have another look/listen.As to fewer instruments I worked backward from that dropping out some parts after the solo but I will look & listen again. Thanks

Last edited by rayc; 03/05/23 04:48 PM.
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