Really nice. Riff rock with a good message.

Appropriately heavy. Nice harmony work in there too.

Strawberry Fields influenced start. Way cool.

Something in that riff part is ever so slightly not in sync to my ear. It might just be me.... but something in there bugs me. It's like milliseconds. That's the only time I hear it is in the riff. It might simply be the way the drums interact in the mix at the end of the riff.

Still.... very good work on this.

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