Floyd,

I think this is really nice, howbeit very sad, which was your intention, I know.

I thought the piano was fine, but since you play you might just do it yourself.

For me, I find I just can't get the precise feeling I am looking for on upfront melodic piano unless I do it myself, especially if I am going for "haunting" and the piano is in the foreground.

FWIIW and YMMV etc etc..

smile

David Snyder
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