I like the way the simple arrangement draws the listener into the song. Piano sounds lovely.

Harmony on the second verse is very effective. Simple drums work nicely.

The "Shine, Living Light" didn't work for me - there was too much competition with the harmonica at that point. It felt like the song was ready to end, but you were trying to keep the original ending and have the extended harmonica solo.

I thought the bluesy ending on the harmonica solo sounded a bit out of place.

But... that's just an opinion.

Nice song! laugh


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?