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Hi all, Here's a children's song. https://soundcloud.com/christian-devienne/fishesChorus: Clownfish or catfish, What beautiful fish are here! Sunfish or sawfish, What beautiful fish are there! 1) Clownfish, you’re orange and white Nobody else is so fun Clownfish, you’re orange and white And you make laugh the Ocean 2) Catfish, in the deep river You just purr in your own way Catfish, in the deep river With urchins you like to play 3) Sunfish, in the blue sea bed Your rounded shape is so nice Sunfish, in the blue sea bed Your light is of great service. 4) Sawfish, you always tinker You cut and fix everything Sawfish, you always tinker With the hammerhead helping RD JazzEven16 RT 711 Acoustic Bass RT 3703 Acoustic Guitar RT 1947 Mandolin RT 1902 Solo Acoustic Guitar RT 1601 Mandolin RT 1593 Fiddle Voice: Natalie (Synthesizer v)
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I did not listen to the original version but I really like this version. Nice use of RTs and the synth voice. Super mix. A really nice children's song.
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Chris, very sweet tune, and nicely mixed. Natalie sounds great, too.
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Hi, Christian. A happy and fun song - I enjoyed listening. Putting on my "grammar police" hat: What beautiful fish is here!The "is" should be "are", because "fish" is plural, so "are" is plural as well. And you make laugh the oceanGoogle tells me this works fine in French ("Et tu fais rire l'océan"). But in English, it's just... broken. ![frown frown](/forums/images/graemlins/default/frown.gif) But not a big deal at all - the song still made me smile. ![smile smile](/forums/images/graemlins/default/smile.gif)
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Thanks Mario, DC Ron and David for your comments. I've changed the chorus using the plural. I think this is a poetic song and I consider the Ocean like a person. So I think that "And you make laugh the Ocean" can be used...
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I think this is a poetic song and I consider the Ocean like a person. So I think that "And you make laugh the Ocean" can be used... Sorry, I wasn't clear. Calling the ocean a person is fine! It's just not written as an English speaker would say it. But then, it wouldn't rhyme, so... All's fair in song and poetry! ![wink wink](/forums/images/graemlins/default/wink.gif)
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Thanks, David, for your useful comment. Do you mean that the correct sentence would be: "And you make the Ocean laugh"
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I've followed David's good advices and I've changed the wrong sentence. Now, it is " You bring joy in the ocean "! Do any of you know of a good English or American children's song site with a forum?
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