Hi, Chris.

Pleasant song, but I've got no clue what it's about. smile

At 1:12, the pronunciation of "and" sounds like /oo n d/ rather than /ae n d/ or /eh n d/. I don't know why SynthesizerV insists on that pronunciation. frown

There are a few places where you've put a weak syllable on a strong beat, but other than that, it sounds pretty good!

Oh, and "World" really needs "the" in front of it.

I'm always happy to hear one of your songs. Nice work.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?