Hi Bob....I really like the feel of this song and what it says. If you do decide to restructure to incorporate a "B" part as has been suggested, and you have to re-sing your vocal part I'd like to hear you duplicate the performance. Not just copy and paste but two vocal tracks as identical as you can make them. Why? Because you have that something we're always seeking in the studio and that's unique "voice quality". A lot of people can sing, but not many are blessed with uniqueness. You are. So much so that I'd like to hear even more of it.

Great effort. Keep up the good work.

Bob