Chris, I always enjoy your creations and arrangements..and totally agree with the sentiment of the lyrics.
May I respectfully say that (in my opinion) when lyrics are created in which the rhyming words have unnatural emphasis on the wrong syllable, it is very distracting for the listener. My hearing ear immediately thinks “we’ll, it rhymes, but no person would ever say the word that way! Then I’m continually listening for another “wrong” pronunciation, and so I’m distracted from all the goodness of the track. Example: no one says plenTEE or empTEE.
OK, this is just my POV on lyric writing and I think it’s always best to avoid this. Otherwise, really enjoyed the melody, chord structure, instrumentation, production..thanks!


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