Love the chord structure and instrumentation in this. Great choice of instruments in the solo breaks, but for me - disagreeing with some others here - a really good song and arrangement is let down by the unattractive effect you used on the vocals. Have you considered using vocal tuning? If I ever get around to singing the songs I've got lined-up (I can't record vocals at home) I may well use one just to avoid flat notes.


Some favourite Waoist Adages:
#1: Play on the Way.
#13: Ask not for whom the flower blooms, it blooms for you.
#58: Bring consciousness to it.
#63: On the road to effortlessness, effort must be made.
#92: Be Love Now, the rest will come on its own.