I think you have a really good start here. Here are my suggestions that you may take or discard as I am not a pro.
1-the song's total volume was very low. I had to turn up my monitors' volume a lot. Note that I always set my songs' volume to -3dB.
2-I thought the backing tracks could come up in volume to make a better mix
3-your vocal was very good
4-the synth vocal was not convincing BUT it was very good considering it was your first attempt at using a synth vocal. I do not have any synth voices so I can not suggest anything on improving them.
5-great lyrics

I think this song has a ton of potential.

Note those were just my suggestions and other may or may not agree.


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