Hi Tom,

The intro surprised me a bit, but you made it a very pleasant song.
And your vocals are very nice, bright with a little twist of humour in it (am I right?)
At least your humour can be seen/hear in your lyrics. Like them!
One small thing to pay attention to; sometimes your voice is too close to the mike, like at 0:51
Oh, I noticed some wrote that too.
And another thing, someone else said it and I agree; the song is a minute too short... ;-)

Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130