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#305394 - 08/05/15 05:28 AM [User Showcase] Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore
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A little morose ballad. wink Mostly BIAB, lost the original .sgu, so not sure which RT's. I apologize in advance for the clichés. grin


https://90dbband.bandcamp.com/track/jenny-doesnt-live-here-anymore


Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore
©2014 Robert Randall Burke/BMI


Jenny doesn't live here anymore
Left it all behind and closed the door
She lost all the battles
Then she won the war
Jenny doesn't live here anymore.

Some vows are written in the sand
One wave erases all your plans
What is forever
If forever never comes?
When will she ever understand?

Somewhere the sun is shining
Through a cloud with a silver lining
On a world where she can be reborn.

Who knows where love goes when it dies?
When does indifference arise?
Does it slip away in darkness
Like a thief in the night?
Who knows where love goes when it dies?

Somewhere the sun is shining
Through a cloud with a silver lining
On a world where she can be reborn.

Jenny doesn't live here anymore.






Regards,

Bob

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#305430 - 08/05/15 10:43 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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"She lost all the battles
Then she won the war "

"Some vows are written in the sand
One wave erases all your plans"

This is an engaging write and the
above lines really stuck with me. The
arrangement and your vocal give
an ethereal feel that really fits
the lyric. Janice says she can
picture her walking away through the
fog. So....nice imagery!

We enjoyed listening.

J&B
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#305432 - 08/05/15 10:51 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Very haunting and beautiful!! Love the arrangement and the use of the strings. Vocal is excellent. Great song all the way around! Take care. Greg

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#305442 - 08/05/15 11:34 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Beautiful song, arrangement and production. One of your best.


Charlie
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#305459 - 08/05/15 01:34 PM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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"little" is not a word I would use to describe that.

It's huge!

Dig those strings throughout - and especially the "lead"...

Awesome vocal. (I like the big reverb).

A great listen. (and a cool title!)

Plan to enjoyed many listens...

floyd

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#305468 - 08/05/15 03:06 PM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Bob,

This is just fantastic! Really well done. Love the strings. Very reflective. Your vocals just keep getting better and better!

Love it.

Steve
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#305501 - 08/06/15 03:47 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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J&B, Greg, Charlie, floyd, Steve,

Thanks for listening and the kind remarks.


Regards,

Bob

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#305512 - 08/06/15 05:30 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Bob, I really like the write. The chord progression is perfect for this. Well sung and the production is spot on. Like Janice, I also see Jenny slipping away in the fog. Great job! Tom

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#305620 - 08/07/15 07:57 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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I think this is your best to date.

Love your vocals - that reverb is outstanding!

Your lyrics are outstanding.

Super job on the chord changes and the strings.
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#305621 - 08/07/15 08:05 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Tom -

Thanks for listening and the kind comments.

Mario -

As a recovering (but incurable) reverb addict, I just can't help myself sometimes. grin Thanks for the kind remarks.


Regards,


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#305731 - 08/08/15 11:13 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Bob,

Beautifully sung. Very Rod Mckuen vibe for me. Loved the piano, those strings and "she lost all the battles and then she won the war" - really nice.

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#305760 - 08/08/15 04:49 PM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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I agree with Janice and Bud these lines pop

"She lost all the battles
Then she won the war "

"Some vows are written in the sand
One wave erases all your plans"

Nice performance; thanks for sharing!
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#305799 - 08/09/15 05:14 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Josie-

Thanks for the kind comments.


Robert -

Thanks for listening and the nice words.


Regards,

Bob

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#305800 - 08/09/15 05:31 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: Greg Johnson]
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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Very haunting and beautiful!!Greg


+1 on that.

There's nothing simple about this, but I very much like the simplicity of the arrangement, if that makes any sense:)

Your delivery and presentation, vocally and musically, outstanding!
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#305821 - 08/09/15 07:55 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: olemon]
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Originally Posted By: Greg Johnson
Very haunting and beautiful!!Greg


+1 on that.

There's nothing simple about this, but I very much like the simplicity of the arrangement, if that makes any sense:)

Your delivery and presentation, vocally and musically, outstanding!




Scott- Thanks for the kind words. I was actually very dissatisfied with this one, but finally just gave up. grin


Regards,

Bob

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#305825 - 08/09/15 08:11 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Hi there Bob.

Wow, that's some powerful reverb you've got working there. Fabulous big stereo wash over everything.

Back in the 80s there was this thing for "Concept" albums and somehow this sounds to me like it's part of a bigger project. Whatever. Did I say I liked it? Well I love it.

You really do produce some excellent stuff, Bob.

Cheers, ROG.

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#305831 - 08/09/15 09:16 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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hi bob this very engageing and moves you great job everything thanks eric
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#305848 - 08/09/15 11:30 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: ROG]
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Originally Posted By: ROG
Hi there Bob.

Wow, that's some powerful reverb you've got working there. Fabulous big stereo wash over everything.

Back in the 80s there was this thing for "Concept" albums and somehow this sounds to me like it's part of a bigger project. Whatever. Did I say I liked it? Well I love it.

You really do produce some excellent stuff, Bob.

Cheers, ROG.




Hi ROG. Thanks for listening. Yeah, it's flooded with verb, but that's the sound I was going for. Always been a big Phil Spector fan! grin


Regards,

Bob

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#305849 - 08/09/15 11:30 AM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: F.M.M.]
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hi bob this very engageing and moves you great job everything thanks eric




Eric -

Thanks.

Regards,

Bob

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#306116 - 08/11/15 07:13 PM [User Showcase] Re: Jenny Doesn't Live Here Anymore [Re: 90 dB]
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Great style! What is the instrument on the right? It sounds like a guitar, is it BIAB?

Wonderfully moody!

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