Page 1 of 2 1 2 >
You need to be logged in to post
Options
Index
#547004 - 07/26/19 11:10 PM [User Showcase] "Britannia"
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
BRITANNIA

https://soundcloud.com/user-427542889/britannia


Britannia was inspired by Dougie MacLean's song Caledonia . I was intrigued by his idea that whenever he is away from his native Scotland he feels her drawing him home. I've never felt such a connection to the land of my birth and I guess I'm just little bit jealous.

BIAB Tracks: _PLAYFUL.STY
3122:Bass, Acoustic, PopHalfNotesPush Ev 120 (Byron House)
N/A 522:Guitar, Acoustic Fingerpicking Ev 120 (Jason Roller)
691:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming AcRockBright Ev 120 (Jason Roller)
~1104:Guitar, Nylon Rhythm BossaGrooveComp Ev 140 (Oliver Gannon)
RealDrums=folk8ths^1 (Bryan Owings)


LYRICS:

I left her many years go; I was young and fancy-free
The world was big and so very wide with much to do and see
And if she ever breathed my name across the deep blue sea
I don’t believe that I ever heard Britannia calling me

Her rolling hills, her valleys
Are not what I call to mind
But when I think of England
It’s the folks that I left behind


My home was where I laid my head; my heart was mine alone
I raised a sweat, a glass or two, and a family of my own
And though she might have cast her net across the deep blue sea
I don’t believe that I ever felt Britannia drawing me

Her bluebell woods, her meadows
Are not what I call to mind
But when I think of England
It’s the folks that I left behind


Yes, there were times I wondered, should I leave or should I stay
I guess that question’s been answered ’cause here I am today
In the blistering heat of a summer I may wish for cooler climes
But I’m proud to call Australia home and nothing will change my mind

Her castles and cathedrals
Are not what I call to mind
But when I think of England
It’s the folks that I left behind

Top
#547007 - 07/26/19 11:56 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 09/27/10
Posts: 3960
Loc: Sacramento, California
dcuny Online   content
Veteran

Registered: 09/27/10
Posts: 3960
Loc: Sacramento, California
Easy-going folk feel, pleasant listen, nice lyrics, good singing.

The only - minor - complaint is I can tell the backing vocals are synthetic. I'm guessing that putting them further in the back (or using a different set of vocals to make the backing track) would fix it. But not a big deal at all.

I enjoyed the song, nicely done! smile
_________________________
-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?

Top
#547009 - 07/27/19 12:07 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: dcuny]
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Thanks, dcuny. Sorry my backing vocals (recorded with the same mic and mixer settings as the melody) sounded synthetic to you. I'm not sure what I can do to make my voice sound more natural - perhaps you can give me a few tips wink

Top
#547018 - 07/27/19 01:12 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 04/13/16
Posts: 2787
Loc: Stanwell Park NSW Australia
rayc Offline
Veteran

Registered: 04/13/16
Posts: 2787
Loc: Stanwell Park NSW Australia
Well structured - the dynamics are really cool.
the right speaker is quite full but the left could use a little balance.
Mate, you'll have to excuse me not commenting on all of your posts - I'm probably missing the best - but you're dropping them thick n fast I and want to ensure I listen to everyone rather than everything.
_________________________
Cheers
rayc
"What's so funny about peace, love & understanding?" - N.Lowe
Pop on over to The Recording Rebels for positive, honest commentary, critiques and support. https://therecordingrebels.com

Top
#547029 - 07/27/19 02:04 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: rayc]
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Thanks, Ray. Ok, I'll need to pay more attention to L/R balance.
As for listening to everything, it's going to take me a while to catch up - there's 132 pages of posts on this forum!

Top
#547267 - 07/29/19 07:50 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 02/15/17
Posts: 3414
Deryk - PG Music Offline
PG Music Staff

Registered: 02/15/17
Posts: 3414
Wow - what a pleasant and easy to take song smile Gentle in it's delivery, but memorable all the while. Your vocals are stunning too. The harmonies flows gorgeously. A beautiful example of a stunning folk tune.

You should be proud of this one - thanks for sharing!
_________________________
Cheers,
Deryk

Top
#547269 - 07/29/19 08:00 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 12/05/11
Posts: 9970
Loc: GA USA
Janice & Bud Offline
Veteran

Registered: 12/05/11
Posts: 9970
Loc: GA USA
Nice!

Enjoyed the spin.

J&B

PS FWIW you’ll get a lot more reviews and views if you let a post linger a while before dropping another one.

Top
#547289 - 07/29/19 09:42 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 06/16/00
Posts: 1944
Loc: Texas
Jim Offline
Expert

Registered: 06/16/00
Posts: 1944
Loc: Texas
You've uploaded quite a few songs...
And I try to listen & comment on all songs on the User Showcase...
I'll put all of your songs here...

BRITANNIA... Nicely done with a laid back feeling.

Another Man's Shoes: Good story song... Great vocals... I really liked the line "And if I’m broke today it’s ’cause I took my Mom’s advice"

Puzzle: Another pleasant song... Very philosophical... Great vocals!

Reel Two: Sounds interesting... I bet you will come up with some good lyrics.

Lost In The City: Another good sounding song... Are you planning to write lyrics for it?

Bossa The Wash: I really like this one... It sounds great as is but it also sounds suitable for lyrics.

Taking The Night Train: Another good piece... I enjoyed the mandolin.

Parisian Promenade: Still another pleasant one... Very lush sounding... Enjoyed the listen.

The City Girl: A good country-rock flavored song... Reminded me of Ricky Nelson's Garden Party... Good production!

Charlie Brown: This one sounds like it could be a good show tune... Nice chordal arrangement.

Brian...
Your output is so prodigious you might want to check out the 50/90 Challenge
_________________________
Jim
†=☮&♥

Top
#547321 - 07/29/19 02:31 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Janice & Bud]
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Thanks for the tip. smile

Top
#547322 - 07/29/19 02:37 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Jim]
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Hi Jim. Thanks for taking the time to review all my recent posts. Your comments a very encouraging. I wouldn't say my output is prodigious - this year I seem to be averaging one every three weeks and right now I have nothing in the pipeline. I might ease up a bit and spend time listening to other Forum member's posts wink

Top
#547334 - 07/29/19 04:03 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 01/18/16
Posts: 1664
Joe -PG Music Offline
PG Music Staff

Registered: 01/18/16
Posts: 1664
Great work Ghostgums! I found the instruments are nicely layered and a pleasure to listen to. Well done!
_________________________
Cheers,
Joe

Top
#547343 - 07/29/19 04:57 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 06/19/17
Posts: 2456
Loc: Victoria, BC
Ember - PG Music Offline
PG Music Staff

Registered: 06/19/17
Posts: 2456
Loc: Victoria, BC
Really neat concept for a song and it's cool to see others getting inspired by folks. I think you did a great job here. Thanks for sharing!
_________________________
Cheers,
Ember

Top
#547366 - 07/29/19 09:33 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 08/21/18
Posts: 1215
Tangmo Offline
Expert

Registered: 08/21/18
Posts: 1215
Lovely folk song. You've a great voice for this kind of work, and an extra-fine sensibility in the writing. I'm drawn to this one because I appreciate the "meaning" as a former military brat who calls no "place" home. Very nicely done.
_________________________
BIAB 2020 Audiophile. Windows 10 64bit. Songwriter, lyricist, composer(?) loving all styles. Some pre-BIAB music from Farfetched Tangmo Band's first CD. https://alonetone.com/tangmo/playlists/close-to-the-ground

Top
#547378 - 07/30/19 12:12 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Tangmo]
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Thanks, Tangmo. I'm a 4th generation Brit-Brat, so constant moving was normal (32 addresses in my first 43 years!).

Top
#547406 - 07/30/19 07:52 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 11/29/06
Posts: 2091
Loc: Finland
jannesan Online   content
Veteran

Registered: 11/29/06
Posts: 2091
Loc: Finland
Very beautiful pop folk song, I can hear the spirit of Britannia calling me in the melody, giving me some vibes of the 70's, so there is something you haven't left behind smile

You have selected simply perfect band for the song. Very enjoyable delicate singing. I like how you varied the first line of the chorus.

And my home is where I lay my computer, keyboard and BIAB smile

Janne
_________________________
Hear My Music:

Soundcloud
YouTube


Top
#547845 - 08/02/19 09:09 AM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 07/11/15
Posts: 3201
Loc: Missouri
Torrey Bliss Offline
Veteran

Registered: 07/11/15
Posts: 3201
Loc: Missouri
Nice job on this Ghostgum!very good vocal and song! I certainly hear a classic 70's folk rock thing going on in here! ,
_________________________
Torrey Bliss
www.soundcloud.com/torrey-bliss



Top
#547906 - 08/02/19 05:49 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 02/20/10
Posts: 1147
Loc: Maryland
TuneMonger Offline
Expert

Registered: 02/20/10
Posts: 1147
Loc: Maryland
Beautiful song sung beautifully. Nobody else has mentioned it, so it's probably just me, but it threw me a bit lyrically to learn so late in the song that you've been in Australia for a long time. An earlier line (my home was where I laid my head) implied a wanderer. I still enjoyed this gem.
_________________________
Windows 10, Intel Core I5 10400, 16 gig ram, Scarlett 6i6, Komplete keyboard, Sony Acid Music Studio 11, BIAB 2020 UltraPlus Pak

Top
#547910 - 08/02/19 06:15 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: TuneMonger]
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
You're right, Tunemonger, it's a late reveal for those listening to a recording. However, since I mainly sing this live to Australian audiences and, more often than not, I have explained beforehand how the song came about, they're quite comfortable with it. Thanks for listening. smile

Top
#547915 - 08/02/19 07:06 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: Ghostgum]
Registered: 09/27/10
Posts: 3960
Loc: Sacramento, California
dcuny Online   content
Veteran

Registered: 09/27/10
Posts: 3960
Loc: Sacramento, California
Originally Posted By: Ghostgum
Thanks, dcuny. Sorry my backing vocals (recorded with the same mic and mixer settings as the melody) sounded synthetic to you. I'm not sure what I can do to make my voice sound more natural - perhaps you can give me a few tips wink

Ha! blush

There's a particular "sweet" sound that I associate - wrongly, in this case - with tight harmonies that are created with pitch-shifted vocals - especially when it's the same singer doing the vocals.

They're just a bit too good. Oh, to have such problems myself! laugh

I know you're kidding, but one way to help avoid this effect of "singing along with yourself" is to shift the vocal formants, so the vocals don't sound like they're all being done by the same person.

For example, in Reaper the ReaPitch effect can be used to adjust formants. Shift the position of the formants, and you'll get versions of yourself with different length vocal tracts - the same pitch, but different timbre.
_________________________
-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?

Top
#547917 - 08/02/19 07:29 PM [User Showcase] Re: "Britannia" [Re: dcuny]
Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Ghostgum Offline
Journeyman

Registered: 04/15/19
Posts: 358
Loc: SA, Australia
Thanks so much for the tip. I had no idea about formants - will check it out. smile

Top
Page 1 of 2 1 2 >


PG Music News
Free Band-in-a-Box® 2021 for Windows Update Available!

Update your installation of Band-in-a-Box® 2021 for Windows for free today!

With the latest update, we've addressed user reported issues with using ASIO drivers, exported MIDI files, out-of-sync visual playback, Mixer volumes, and more!

If you're using Band-in-a-Box® 2021 for Windows, download this free update today.

(This update also includes DAW Plugin build v.3.4.4)

Band-in-a-Box® 2021 French for Windows is Here!

Nous avons beaucoup travaillé pour offrir à Band-in-a-Box® 2021 cette étonnante panoplie de quelques 80 fonctions inédites et sa collection de contenus originaux à savoir: 202 RealTracks, des RealStyles inédits, des SuperTracks MIDI, des Etudes Instrument, des Performances Artiste, un Bonus RealDrums "Solo", des transcriptions RealDrums, les MultiStyles PAK 1, les Xtra Styles PAK 10 et bien plus encore …!

Nouvelles Fonctionnalités
Band-in-a-Box® et RealBand 2021: Tous Packages

Band-in-a-Box® 2021 for Windows Reviews!

Head to www.gearsltuz.com for the latest Band-in-a-Box® reviews by Sound-Guy and CoolGuitarGear!

Band-in-a-Box continues to evolve into an expansive musical tool-set for both novice and experienced musicians. You can produce not only new compositions and arrangements, but also perform them with excellent musical “talent”. It’s easy to use the basic functions, and challenging enough to keep you occupied for years. As it has been for years, it’s an amazing program.
-Sound-Guy

From my perspective, as a long-time user of BIAB, the above improvements, changes and additions definitely take the program to the next step. The new elements and audio upgrading are fantastic and I’m even more excited to work with this version than some others in the past.
-CoolGuitarGear

How To Quickly Adjust Your Chord Sheet Size

Did you know you can quickly adjust the size of your chord sheet in Band-in-a-Box® by holding CTRL while scrolling with the mouse scroll wheel?

How handy!

Band-in-a-Box® 2021 German for Windows is Here!

Band-in-a-Box® 2021 für Windows® ist hier!
Wir waren fleißig und haben 80 neue Funktionen und eine erstaunliche Sammlung neuer Inhalte hinzugefügt, darunter 202 RealTracks, neue RealStyles, MIDI-SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, Artist Performances, Bonus RealDrums "Singles", RealDrums Transkriptionen, MultiStyles PAK 1, Xtra Styles PAK 10 und vieles mehr!

Was ist neu? | Paket

Band-in-a-Box® 2021 for Windows - New Intro Options!

With Band-in-a-Box® 2021 there are additional options for generating an intro!

Within Band-in-a-Box, choose Song Form | Generate Intro to see all the different options available:
-All Instruments
-Drums only
-Bass and Drums
-NEW! Bass only
-NEW! Bass then Bass & Drums
-NEW! Drums then Bass & Drums
-NEW! Piano Only
-NEW! Guitar Only
-NEW! Strings Only
-NEW! Custom - you pick!

Band-in-a-Box® 2020 for Mac Update Available!

We've updated our Band-in-a-Box® 2020 for Mac to enhance Big Sur and M1 capabilities, improve the notation window, resolve AIFF rendering errors, as well as addressing a few other user-reported issues.

Using Band-in-a-Box® 2020 for Mac? Update for free today.

Forum Stats
33992 Members
67 Forums
68416 Topics
586616 Posts

Max Online: 2537 @ 01/19/20 07:09 AM
Newest Members
Mark Otten, Gezeiten-Winky, GFT, jose303, L_HIL

33992 Registered Users
Top Posters (30 Days)
MarioD 202
dcuny 198
MusicStudent 150
Matt Finley 146
Janice & Bud 134
Jim Fogle 129
VideoTrack 116
Al-David 94
eddie1261 90
MountainSide 90
Today's Birthdays
Burton Trent, mamcom, Péper