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#684186 - 11/20/21 01:57 PM
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Not Gone
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Registered: 09/28/14
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Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities
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You're Not Gone Song about losing parents I used the _BestiLL.Sty and the following tracks: Bass 1825 Pedal Steel -- 369 Guitar1 1595 Guitar2 065 Fiddle 085
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#684204 - 11/20/21 03:12 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Registered: 02/20/10
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Good song. GREAT singer! Who was that? Nice remembrance.
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#684293 - 11/20/21 11:09 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Registered: 04/13/16
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That's a talk back radio voice. Lot's of depth and a bit of crack.
Sticking the drums over to the side feels weird but it's a pleasant melody, a comfy narrative and a super polite band.
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#684464 - 11/21/21 04:07 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Registered: 09/02/18
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This is a great, chart worthy song. Well written and fabulous performance. Lyrics and music touch the heart.
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#684465 - 11/21/21 04:10 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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THanks everyone--I wrote this for a client that wanted something that sounded like Remember When but about his two parents that died a month apart.
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#684468 - 11/21/21 05:05 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Bob ... I thought I'd commented on this one yesterday. Obviously, I had not. It's a really nicely put-together project. Everything does what it should and more. Perfect vocalist, heart-warming lyric - though poignant, convincing backing tracks and really fine mixing. Really nice! Fits the occasion perfectly.
Best to you. Take care ...
Alan
Edited by Al-David (11/21/21 05:39 PM)
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#684475 - 11/21/21 05:27 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Registered: 01/06/20
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Nice.
Easing pain is a good thing.
moto
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#684639 - 11/22/21 09:58 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Lovely country tune. Super vocal and lyric. Excellent backtrack. Well done
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#684881 - 11/23/21 11:06 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: Scott C]
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Loc: Chicago and Twin Cities
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#684949 - 11/23/21 04:54 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Well done Bob, great vocal and production.
I particularly liked the chord progression.
Rob4580
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#685007 - 11/24/21 12:01 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Loc: Queensland, Australia
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Great voice. Nice heartfelt song and delivery.
Cheers,
Mike
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#685114 - 11/24/21 07:43 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: mkg50 (Mike G)]
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not my genre...but a highly impressive song with lots of sensitivity, and tasty lyrics.
really nice character vocs.
only suggestion is on the lyric 'missing you' ...
doubling the vocs.
your another wonderfull example of the depth of talent on these forums.
well done.
best
oldmuso
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#685401 - 11/25/21 09:50 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: justanoldmuso]
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Thanks for the advice. I will make that change
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#685411 - 11/25/21 10:16 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Hello Bob
This is a very beautiful but of course also sad song
The singing is really great
The melody is very nice to match
Really well done
Hopefully the song helps to process what happened
Many greetings
Andi ;-)
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#686290 - 11/29/21 10:52 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Very nice Bob!! I lost both my parents in the past 5 years or so.....has to be the most painful thing a person can experience, other than losing a child.....that one would kill me. Vocalist is great and arrangement appropriately sweet and sparse. Great stuff!! Take care. Greg
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#686427 - 11/29/21 08:27 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Excellent job - good write, vocals and production.  The short phrases with space between them are especially effective here.
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#686737 - 11/30/21 09:00 PM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Loc: Canberra, Australia
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Poignant song, Bob. Really well sung.
Regards,
Leon
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#696849 - 01/08/22 06:14 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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I am making a few updates to this-an aspiring country singer picked it up-- maybe something good will happen with it-- thx
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#697571 - 01/11/22 06:34 AM
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[Re: ChicagoBob]
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Bob,
A good song. Good Country voice.
The BIAB backing is a good vehicle. (The panned right drums is pretty old-school).
Sounds good.
fj
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#697576 - 01/11/22 06:59 AM
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Re: Not Gone
[Re: ChicagoBob]
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That's a good song. Well written.
That singer is mighty fine. He has a voice that sounds like many of the current crop of guys out of Nashville. Maybe he'll get picked up.
I didn't like how it ended. Kinda left me hanging.... That last chord needs to resolve back to the root. One other thing if this is being pitched..... do something else with the steel. It really doesn't fit like it is. Either lose it totally, and clean up the mix or use volume envelopes and bring it in where it fits rather than letting it drone on in the background as a distraction to an otherwise damn near perfect song. Personally, if this was mine..... I'd replace it with a tasty fiddle and let it come in for a few fills here and there.
Edit: As I was writing, I heard the fiddle..... so.... lose the steels and let the fiddle do a couple of tasty fills and bring it up in volume.
Loved this song
Edited by Guitarhacker (01/11/22 07:02 AM)
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