Previous Thread
Index
Next Thread
Print Thread
Go To
Page 1 of 2 1 2
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
David and Rachel Radio 2.22.23: IF WE CAN MAKE IT THROUGH MIDNIGHT

Hey Y'all,

Here is the latest offering from Rachel and David. Rachel is taking a few weeks off from the mic and has minor surgery today, so everyone say a little prayer! smile Nothing too serious, but send one up. We have quickly entered family-like status and she is now officially a sister!!

Here is one she wrote the lyrics to called “If We Make It Through Midnight.”

This is a monster production, so I am sure there can be adjustments but I do like this tune. A smattering of tracks are are the bottom, but there is more, and then more, and a little more.

As is our new custom, links to our recently released stuff will be in our weekly updates below the current song’s lyrics just for convenience and to eliminate the clutter—in case you missed something and are dying to hear it. smile


IF WE CAN MAKE IT THROUGH MIDNIGHT


https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/if-we-can-make-it-through-midnight


By Rachel Cintula and David Snyder

V1

Wolves have reached our door
Led here because I needed more
Now you’re watching my broken tears pour
Forever more, thought I would see the sunset with you every night
make love until we fell asleep in the dawning daylight

CH

Please
I need you
You can’t go
My heart is sure and my heart is the only think I know
We can make this right, ah we can make it right
If we can make it, just make through midnight

V2

We know what’s been broken
Half visible things now spoken
Hidden things can be awoken
Everything is open
Everything laid bare
We know what’s been between us
And we know what’s still there
And we know those millions reasons
Why you and I should care

CH

So Please
I need you
You can’t go
My heart is sure and my heart’s the only think I know
We can make this right, ah we can make it right
If we can make it, just make through midnight

BR

What’s been done has been done before
Please don’t walk out our door

CH

Please
don't leave me
You can’t go
My heart is sure and my heart’s the only think I know
We can make this right, ah we can make it right
If we can make it, just make it
through
midnight

All music and lyrics copyright Rachel Cintula and David Snyder/ASCAP

David Snyder Vocals, Instrumentation, Mixing, Mastering

RealTracks in style: 1536:Bass, Electric, PopBelieve Ev16 065
RealTracks in style: 4014:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModPopDistortedHiArpTrem Ev16 65
RealTracks in style: 3906:Guitar, Acoustic, Rhythm SongwriterSlow16DADGAD Ev16 060
RealTracks in style: 4013:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModPopDistortedLoArp Ev16 65
MIDI SuperTracks in song: 2058:Strings, Rhythm CelticAir Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 4012:Guitar, Electric, Rhythm ModPopDistortedSwellsHeld 65
Loop in Song: Chillout\Chillout - serenity_66_drum_loop_f_minor ev16.wav
RealTracks in song: 1006:Piano, Acoustic, Solo-Accompaniment, PopCaliforniaSlow Ev 085
RealDrums in style:SmoothBalladBrushes: a: Snare, HiHatb: Snare, Ride


Other links for the week and month:

https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/penelope
https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/big-wide-open-road
https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/when-it-rains
https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/thick-thighs
https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/church-girls
https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/one-more-whiskey-song
https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/dirty-hands-clean-money
https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/dire-straits
https://soundcloud.com/rachelanddavidworktapes/creek-day
https://soundcloud.com/david-snyder-gigs3/make-me-love-again


User Showcase
Joined: Feb 2016
Posts: 2,294
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Feb 2016
Posts: 2,294
David and Rachel...very pretty track and melody...obviously you guys have found a great songwriting team here...technically my only suggestion would be to bring the choir BGV's down in the mix...they seem a bit dominate for my tastes (for what it's worth)...I don't know if they're canned or not (BiaB, keyboard generated, etc.)...but to my ear one of the female voices sounds off pitch...anyway...prayed a pray for Rachel (believing all will go well)...keep up the good work guys!


www.soundclick.com/firesong
BiaB 2024, Steinberg Cubase Pro 13, Wavelab 11.2, SpetraLayers Pro 10, Audacity, Steinberg UR44 Interface, Yamaha Genos, Roland FP60 and FP10, Windows 10

You are who you are because you do what you do because of what you believe.
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Hey Dan,

You are right. I noticed that too. They are BIAB and I did notice that and thought I had pulled them down far enough. I usually don't get that with the BIAB vocals but in this case, well, you have good ears!!

It is usually me who is off pitch!

smile

I will fix that if we ever use it for something else, and make a note. I was so distracted by other issues, I guess I didn't catch it. There were 1,000 things to catch on this one.

User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2022
Posts: 2,333
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Jul 2022
Posts: 2,333
Beautiful love song, I like the lyrics and the way you deliver them.

Good arrangement and good mix, but I would remove the choir and sing a harmony (or have Rachel sing), I think that would fit the song and the mood better.
But, overall you guys are getting better and better.

I don't pray, but please send Rachel my best wishes!

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
B.D.,

Yeah, you're right. I was pulling my hair out on this one, with so many moving parts that were driving me nuts. I will ditch the choir.

smile

P.S. Rachel says thanks and she's praying for you. Everything went well!

Also, I am working on a new tune.

Dear Lord, Please Teach BD How to Pray

by David Snyder

V1

Dear Lord
Please teach BD how to pray
we know he don't believe in you
but you love him anyway
and we don't want to see him rot in hell
or burn in hell that way
cause he has so many cool hip songs
he has to learn to play

CH

Oh Lord!
Please help BD pray!
That synth girl he has singing
can't show him the way
and those tech tracks will be useless
when it comes to Judgment Day
so please help BD
the guy from another country guy
the tech pop kind of Berlin black pants guy
the sort of synth pop AI synth girl guy
the guy who makes our day!
Our Lord
Please teach
BD
that BD guy
to get a brain
and not feel the pain
oh Lord
please teach BD
how.....
to PRAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I am mixing this tune right now.

I think it is going to be a hit.

I might pull Rachel in on some new phat rhymes....




User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2022
Posts: 2,333
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Jul 2022
Posts: 2,333
Hahaha, I think this is the first time someone wrote a song for/about me.
Thanks man!

Originally Posted By: David Snyder
and we don't want to see him rot in hell

You can be a good person without believing in God.
All you need is love.

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 8,007
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2010
Posts: 8,007
David / Rachel,

Love the song. It has a very early 70s ballad feel to me. Excellent vocal David.

All the best to Rachel.

Bob

User Showcase
Joined: Jun 2020
Posts: 2,569
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Jun 2020
Posts: 2,569
A neat song. Three personal preferrence things jumped out.
1) I'm not sure if a back-to-back repeating lyric completely works here "We can make this right, ah we can make it right". Maybe "We can make it this right, daybreak is in sight" or similar?
2) To me the "ah" kind of sounds like an "or"
3) The band is too busy which detracts from the vocals. This is an intimate conversation between he and she. The background vocals (to me) don't support the melody or conversation well and there may be too many guitars. Sometimes less is more.

These are matters of taste and there is a lot of moving parts in this. So take all this with grains of salt.

We're praying for Rachael that all will go well.

--Thump


https://soundcloud.com/user-646279677
BiaB 2025 Windows
For me there’s no better place in the band than to have one leg in the harmony world and the other in the percussive. Thank you Paul Tutmarc and Leo Fender.
User Showcase
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,644
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Nov 2007
Posts: 5,644
Hi David and Rachel,

Had a listen the other day but didn't have time to comment.

I agree with others about the choir, but other than that, another great song from you two!

Hope Rachel is better soon, and looking forward to hearing more!

User Showcase
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,335
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2011
Posts: 4,335
Will the real David Snyder please stand up. Well you have! I am glad to hear you singing in your real straight forward voice. It sounds good and makes these songs so much more accessible. Once again great song. The melody is really good. It is a lot of fun listening to this wonderful collab. Best to Rachel. It sounds like she is shy about singing. Keep pushing her. Tom

User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2020
Posts: 3,448
J
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
J
Joined: Jan 2020
Posts: 3,448
very interesting emotive lyrics.

just a couple of ideas mate..i hope you dont mind me mentioning...

i sorta yearned for the lead vocs to be up a tad in level
and in the choruses it would be superb if a female vocal
was singing with you. but maybe these are just my feelings.

its a great song david. and i know its difficult to do this given the limitations of project sudios..
but if you could record a live wonderful choir with this
song it would make this great emotive song elevated into the stratosphere imho. cos its such a good song idea and lyrics.

happiness

om

Last edited by justanoldmuso; 02/24/23 04:49 AM.

my songs....mixed for good earbuds...(fyi..my vocs on all songs..)
https://soundcloud.com/alfsongs
(90 songs created useing bb/rb)
(lots of tips of mine in pg tips forum.)
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 23,092
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 23,092
David, another great song from the dynamic duo.
Super lyrics, great vocal, and perfectly mixed.

Tell Rachel she is in our prayers.


Doc-take it easy John this is just a sharp scalpel. It will not cut deep so don't worry.
Me-I'm not John
Doc-I know, I am!

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware
User Showcase
Joined: Sep 2010
Posts: 7,524
Veteran
Online Content
Veteran
Joined: Sep 2010
Posts: 7,524
Hi, Dave.

Nice song - the initial line got my attention. Good vocal as well.

I hear you on having too many tracks to wrangle - when I do it, it's usually sign that I should start cutting out tracks. I think a leaner arrangement is better suited to this kind of song, but since I tend to over-stuff my own arrangements, what do I know? wink

Anyway, good work both of you.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?
User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2012
Posts: 12,400
Y'all are really knockin' 'em out. On a roll.

A beautiful song.
A heartfelt vocal.

Keep 'em coming...

fj

User Showcase
Joined: Apr 2018
Posts: 2,012
D
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
D
Joined: Apr 2018
Posts: 2,012
David and Rachel,

The roll continues . . . and I’m enjoying riding this with you two. I don’t know what makes me more envious . . . the quality of the stuff you guys are writing or the fact that you are so prolific. Love the melody of the chorus, particularly those opening lines. Brilliant—I mean—brilliant write. I think one of your best vocals. The version I’m listening to has the choir vocals and I agree that they are a bit too much and detract from your lovely vocal. I think just strings would work and would 86 the choir (or dial it way back). Beyond that, the production is solid and the song overall is superb! Great work!

My best to you both,

Deej

User Showcase
Joined: Jan 2023
Posts: 28
Enthusiast
Offline
Enthusiast
Joined: Jan 2023
Posts: 28
Thank you for the well wishes and prayers. I had the first of two scheduled skin cancer surgeries on my face this week. Please protect yourself from the sun!

David and I do have a plan for he and I to take turns singing, so I will be back on vocals soon.

I genuinely everyone who takes the time to listen and comment. It is very encouraging for me!

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Thanks Bob!

I really appreciate that!

I love 70s ballads!

smile

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323

Thank ya Thumpa.

I will trim it all back for the official release.

smile

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Thank Dave! I appreciate that man!

smile

User Showcase
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Veteran
OP Offline
Veteran
Joined: Aug 2014
Posts: 8,323
Thanks Tommy.

I am afraid there is no one real David Snyder, my friend.

As the good book says "We are legion."

Bu ha ha ha ha!!

smile

Just kidding.

Thanks man!!

Previous Thread
Next Thread
Go To
Page 1 of 2 1 2

Link Copied to Clipboard
ChatPG

Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.

ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.

PG Music News
Band-in-a-Box 2025 Italian Version is Here!

Cari amici
È stata aggerate la versione in Italiano del programma più amato dagli appassionati di musica, il nostro Band-in-a-Box.
Questo è il link alla nuova versione 2025.

Di seguito i link per scaricare il pacchetti di lingua italiana aggiornati per Band-in-a-Box e RealBand, anche per chi avesse già comprato la nuova versione in inglese.

Band-in-a-Box 2025 - Italiano
RealBand 2025 - Italiano

Band-in-a-Box 2025 French Version is Here!

Bonjour à tous,

Band-in-a-Box® 2025 pour Windows est disponible en Français.
Le téléchargement se fait à partir du site PG Music

Pour ceux qui auraient déjà acheté la version 2025 de Band-in-a-Box (et qui donc ont une version anglaise), il est possible de "franciser" cette version avec les patchs suivants:

BIAB 2025 - francisation
RealBand 2025 - francisation

Voilà, enjoy!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 German Version is Here!

Band-in-a-Box 2025 für Windows Deutsch ist verfügbar!

Die deutsche Version Band-in-a-Box® 2025 für Windows ist ab sofort verfügbar!

Alle die bereits die englische Version von Band-in-a-Box und RealBand 2024 installiert haben, finden hier die Installationsdateien für das Sprachenupdate:

https://nn.pgmusic.com/pgfiles/languagesupport/deutsch2025.exe
https://nn.pgmusic.com/pgfiles/languagesupport/deutsch2025RB.exe

Update Your Band-in-a-Box® 2025 to Build 1128 for Windows Today!

Already using Band-in-a-Box 2025 for Windows®? Download Build 1128 now from our Support Page to enjoy the latest enhancements and improvements from our team.

Stay up to date—get the latest update now!

Update to RealBand® 2025 Build 5 Windows Today!

Already using RealBand® 2025 for Windows®? Download Build 5 now from our Support Page to ensure you have the latest enhancements and improvements from our team.

Get the latest update today!

PowerTracks Pro Audio 2025 for Windows is Here!

PowerTracks Pro Audio 2025 is here! This new version introduces many features, including VST3 support, the ability to load or import a .FLAC file, a reset option for track height in the Tracks window, a taller Timeline on the Notation window toolbar, new freeze buttons in the Tracks window, three toolbar modes (two rows, single row, and none), the improved Select Patch dialog with text-based search and numeric patch display, a new button in the DirectX/VST window to copy an effects group, and more!

First-time packages start at only $49. Already a PowerTracks Pro Audio user? Upgrade for as little as $29!

www.pgmusic.com/powertracks.htm

Video: Summary of the New Band-in-a-Box® App for iOS®

Join Tobin as he takes you on a tour of the new Band-in-a-Box® app for iOS®! Designed for musicians, singer-songwriters, and educators, this powerful tool lets you create, play, and transfer songs effortlessly on your iPhone® or iPad®—anytime, anywhere.

Band-in-a-Box® for iOS® :Summary video.

Check out the forum post for more information.

Forum Statistics
Forums58
Topics84,089
Posts775,305
Members39,582
Most Online25,754
Jan 24th, 2025
Newest Members
CsLy@13, Kendrick Wilderman, kmvertns01, Creon, ASMusic
39,585 Registered Users
Top Posters(30 Days)
MarioD 142
WaoBand 98
DC Ron 96
rsdean 84
zedd 63
Today's Birthdays
adaguerre@live.c, Guitarzan, ovation99, rmreport
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5