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“don't let that dream get out of sight catch it goin' by and hold it tight” Janice (the romantic optimist) said this reminded her of her favorite Carl Sandburg quote, “Let a joy keep you. Reach out your hands and take it when it runs by.” What a joyous song you and Bill created! Your vocals are wonderful (as always) and make us want to “hold on tight.”  The band is cooking and the sax solo at the end was a very nice touch. It sounds like another joyous voice! EVERY detail of the production is hittin' the note. Our hats are off and the pint glass is tipped to y’all! J&B
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Sounds like it was produced in a big Nashville Pro Studio. Excellent sound quality. Good song, everything fits together perfectly. I really like your backing harmonies.
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I did not see this song coming. Stealth. Everywhere. It hid in the bushes for quite some time. It's crazy how many times I've had to say that about your songs. And yet, they are always you. You are great at setting expectations only to break them. Ya gotta love that. Nothing boring...ever! All the obvious things I would say are great you can just figure they apply to this song as well. 
That bridge was perfection. It sounded great, had fantastic instrumentation choices and change of feel for a really nice contrast. I liked how the "sound" was the perfect heightener to the lyrics. Really well done.
As I mention to dcuny earlier...the bridge melody was a quick experiment - so, nice to know it worked on some level...
Speaking of lyrics, there's some really cool things going on! The melodic chime words very well internally without distracting from what's being said. Nice!
Much of the lyric was from Bill original - so he deserves credit for much of that...
Now, being totally honest, that sax solo couldn't have hit me harder had it been dub step! I just want to put into perspective to you, how little I saw that coming. Now, I do think it will grow on me. I did like it, but on first listen I found myself more listening mostly to that AND evaluating it in the song, over just listening to the song.
That being said, I can't over emphasize it was not, by any means, bad. I liked it. I think it's a combination of I haven't heard a sax solo in a song for a while. Cool idea. Just need my stupid brain to catch up a little. ha!
Surprises all over the place!!
Now, that voice of yours. THIS is the range you should sing in. Maybe because it's a little faster, or...??? Something has it sounding better than ever to me. And that, my friend, is saying A LOT. Just WOW!
That is nice to hear. It's the most current sounding pop song on the forums that I'm sure will be on the radio tomorrow once again.  Seriously though, awesome song once again! Sincerely appreciated...
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Clarence Clemmons on the outro.
Very up in melody, theme and arrangement.
The voice is ab fab.
The song works so well that I'll listen again. Thanks, ray... Another great band mix, vocal and lyric, Floyd.
Toe tap time.
Vic Vic - thanks... Sounds great as per usual, Floyd. Excellent vocal and write. Band sounds good, and both the guitar and sax solo work well. I see you wrote it back in 2015, is the mix from then as well or did you remix? Mix sounds great BTW, just curious  Much appreciated, Dave. It was actually written and recorded in 2013. And this is that original mix. I hear things that I would certainly do different today (mix-wise and track-wise) but most were small things and nothing that made me cringe and think "this needs a re-mix" (not saying it couldn't benefit from a re-mix) and, so I left it for now to reflect "where I was at the time". As dcuny mentioned, the solo could have use some massaging...
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Hi Floyd great choice of real tracks love the lyrics vocals are excellent well mixed pro sounding love your contribution's thanks for sharing Eric
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Hi floyd jane,
The compositions you submit are always excellent. Arrangement is very well done. The whole is pleasant. Well done.
Kindly regard
Derochette
alias JaniJackFlash Thanks, Derochette... floyd
Excellent as ever. I like the sax nice touch, and the vocals and harmonies were spot on.
Pro mix, excellent lyric and great performance. I think you covered all the bases.
Peter Thanks, Peter... Floyd, you are one powerhouse of a musician.
Your lyrics are always great.
Your vocals are always great.
But what most impresses me most is your ability to pick the perfect banding tracks to augment your vocals and lyrics.
Outstanding song. Much appreciated, Mario...
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Great song well done. In my family I'm no doubt the crazy old uncle so that hit home. Thanks for stopping by, Doggie... Yep! There are so many wonderful benefits on this forum, but you are the best thing ever, Floyd. You are still one of my favorite traveling music companions I've ever had. Thank you so much for sharing so generously. Yep, another beauty I can take for a ride. Thanks for the offer. [Of course, all of the things that I say every time to your songs still applies to this gem. Vocals, lyrics, melody, feel, mix and master are all over-the-top notch.] Marty - you are far too kind... Hi Floyd
You have written so many great songs
But I like this one the best
So well sung, such a good song structure - Great !!!!
And of course the sax solo at the end - Fits perfectly
Makes real fun
Many greetings
Andi ;-) Thanks, Andi....
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You're productions and mixes are always spot on, Floyd! Vocals are awesome as always and, yes, the sax solo was a nice surprise at the end as well.
Dewey
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Hi Floyd ...
I first listen to this a couple of days ago. Didn't have time to leave a comment, but have a few moments at the minute. This might be the most "Pop-ish" song I've heard from. Yet, it has that Floyd Jane touch.
The sax fade is real nice. I can imagine Ronnie Milsap doing this around 1980 or so.
More excellence coming from the Floyd Jane studio!
Alan
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Floyd,
Man, you guys are an awesome songwriting team! This song is chocked full of beautiful lyrical phrases and catchy melody bits! The country rock vibe is beautifully evident but still has a slight pop touch in places!
I've mentioned before that your material reminds me a lot of one of my favorite groups of the late 70's early 80's Toby Beau from Texas. Just listen to their self-titled album and you'll see what I mean! You could have easily been a member! They would probably have been glad to have you!
Thanks, TB
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Very enjoyable radio-friendly, catchy pop song with a harmless message.
The bridge is the highlight both lyrically and musically, I like the use of the electric piano there.
Great vocals, really strong interpretation, although I feel that the song would fit better for a some 20 year old guy (hitwise).
Janne
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Hi, Floyd !
This is a masterpiece ! I love it really much !
WOW those cool vocals ! Cheers Dani Much appreciated, dani... “don't let that dream get out of sight catch it goin' by and hold it tight” Janice (the romantic optimist) said this reminded her of her favorite Carl Sandburg quote, “Let a joy keep you. Reach out your hands and take it when it runs by.” What a joyous song you and Bill created! Your vocals are wonderful (as always) and make us want to “hold on tight.” The band is cooking and the sax solo at the end was a very nice touch. It sounds like another joyous voice! EVERY detail of the production is hittin' the note. Our hats are off and the pint glass is tipped to y’all! J&B We appreciate the marvelous comments.... Sounds like it was produced in a big Nashville Pro Studio. Excellent sound quality. Good song, everything fits together perfectly. I really like your backing harmonies.
That's always nice to hear...thanks!, Elliott... Hi Floyd great choice of real tracks love the lyrics vocals are excellent well mixed pro sounding love your contribution's thanks for sharing Eric Thanks, eric..
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Very well put together. Very easy listen and hits all the right places. Well done.
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Dewwy, Alan, Torrey, Janne, Rick...
I appreciate y'all taking the time to have a listen and to comment.
Thanks!!!
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Boy, I really like that one Floyd. You're a very talented man.
Music is an expression that is a universal language, Never criticize anybody to harshly. They need time to grow but when they do, they do. Always be kind in what you say and do because the man upstairs is watching.
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Excellent tune Floyd. What a cool groove to the song. The bass lines really stand out on the song. Super vocal and lyric. Really love the mix and production. Sax was cool on the outro. Well done
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FJ & Bill
Cool bouncy groove goes very well with lyrics and clever phrasing. Excellent vocals. It's a mixed bag of instruments, but they create a very neat band! Ace mix. Sax was a nice touch, but I wish it would be more "airy" and slightly more centered. Good one and thank you for sharing.
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