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Here is another moody song, with chorus harmony by Jan Hauenstein.

https://fredgrittner.bandcamp.com/track/everything-to-wish-for

Everything to Wish For

I was taught
To be judicious
I got suspicious
Went my own way
If I were rich
So ambitious
That’s fictitious
One more someday

CHORUS
Between twilight and midnight
There’s a wide-open door
With nothing left to say
And everything to wish for
Everything to wish for

What’s gone down
Has left me reeling
A heartsick feeling
A shocking day
Don’t expect
I’ll feel better
If I let her
Have her own way
CHORUS

I gave chase
Tilting windmills
Building molehills
From tears and sand
Can’t say why
I’m optimistic
Am I simplistic
On where things stand
CHORUS


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Good write, Fred. I like the low harmony. Excellent choice. A good soft sound unobstruced by ostentatious clamoring of ego-maniac musicians. Still, I miss them, but they have no place in this beautiful thought-provoking song. Well done.


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Fred, a lovely, poignant song. Many good lines, but I particularly liked the "building molehills" passage. You're vocals deliver with a delicate touch that's nice to hear. Excellent arrangement and mix, too. Just great.


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Fred, what a great song.
Super vocal
Outstanding lyrics
Great mix


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Really nice gentle song and vocals. You have a very young-sounding voice


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Originally Posted by BabuMusic
Good write, Fred. I like the low harmony. Excellent choice. A good soft sound unobstruced by ostentatious clamoring of ego-maniac musicians. Still, I miss them, but they have no place in this beautiful thought-provoking song. Well done.

Thanks, Marty.


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Hi, Fred.

Love your use of language in the lyrics.

Pleasant to listen to, folk with a touch of melancholy.

Really nice. smile


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Originally Posted by DC Ron
Fred, a lovely, poignant song. Many good lines, but I particularly liked the "building molehills" passage. You're vocals deliver with a delicate touch that's nice to hear. Excellent arrangement and mix, too. Just great.
Thanks, Ron.


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That's a sweet song , flow nicely lyrically and melody wise man

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You set up a rhyming scheme in V1 that was interesting if a little tortured in execution, (judicious).
I missed that in the subsequent verses.
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Nice, gentle rolling song.


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Originally Posted by MarioD
Fred, what a great song.
Super vocal
Outstanding lyrics
Great mix

Thanks, Mario.


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Originally Posted by WaoBand
Really nice gentle song and vocals. You have a very young-sounding voice

Thanks.


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Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Fred.

Love your use of language in the lyrics.

Pleasant to listen to, folk with a touch of melancholy.

Really nice. smile

Thanks, David.


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So beautiful. Understated, sensitive, haunting. Love it.

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Pretty, gentle song, nicely sung.
Enjoyed it.

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I like that lyrical hook. Gentle song with a poignant message. Excellent choice for your band. I enjoyed the song!

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A really nice, soulful song!!! A very ambitious rhyme scheme which you handled without a touch of rhymitis. Some really nice lyrics throughout!!! GREAT job!!! Take care. Greg

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Originally Posted by musician17
So beautiful. Understated, sensitive, haunting. Love it.

Thank you.


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Originally Posted by PeterF
Fred

Pretty, gentle song, nicely sung.
Enjoyed it.

Peter
Thanks, Peter.


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"I was taught
To be judicious
I got suspicious
Went my own way
If I were rich
So ambitious
That’s fictitious
One more someday"

Nice lyric and cool rhymes indeed.

As Peter said, "Pretty, gentle song, nicely sung"
That well sums it all up.

Enjoyed it!

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