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This is a song I just wrote...it's an adaptation on a poem that my good friend Bob Severin wrote and gave me last weekend...so...if you do...thanks for listening and I welcome all comments or suggestions...thanks Dan

Across the Jordan
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Vocals: Solaria and Natalie (Synth V)

RealTracks in song: 1856:Cello, Background PopCountry Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 4198:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking SongwriterGentleFolkRock Ev 100

I added: acoustic guitar, synth pad, synth bass and percussion


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Dan,

A beautiful song...

Love the instrumentation and superb mix. The phrasing here by your Synth V vocalists is excellent. Great tone and emotional punch.

Excellent all around!

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Dan, you have mastered those synth voices
Great vocal lines and exceptional lyrics
Loved those harmonies and your added tracks
All mixed to perfection.


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Lovely song, Dan! Great vocals, as usual, and the arrangement is really nice. Love the modulation and the synth pad, and the bouncy bass provides a nice movement. The BiaB cello at the end sounds perfect. Another cool one, and not close to 40 years old,either!


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You are so good at this, Dan. In a class of brilliance, you are the teacher. Outstanding mix with the sublte changes and inspirational build. Excellent choices on the bass. Everything so well played in a very moving way carrying the message Bob phrased so well.


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Hi Dan
Very nice and calm song
The modern accompaniment fits perfectly with the vocals
You really succeeded very well
Great song Dan
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Dan (and Bob),

Cool collab. A lovely song. A perfect sense of soaring-above-the-water...
The acoustic guitar sounds great. Nice pads...

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Well the voice may have changed, but the writer, the song and the message lives on! Good stuff Dan, you never cease to amaze.

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This is a really nice song and production, but I really feel that it needs a real human to express the lyrics. Just yesterday I uninstalled SynthV as although it works with some songs it's not for me, though that's just my personal bias.


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Originally Posted by WaoBand
This is a really nice song and production, but I really feel that it needs a real human to express the lyrics. Just yesterday I uninstalled SynthV as although it works with some songs it's not for me, though that's just my personal bias.
Thanks for your comments...trust me if I could sing these days I would be recording myself...as is...the DMHV (digitally manipulated human voices) have saved my writing and recording life and allowed me to keep demoing the music. Dan


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Really nice, Dan.
Not sure about the bass rhythm at first as it seemed to be at odds with the vocal and synth.
As the song progressed though, it sounded fine.
Another good one.
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Dan,

Beautiful tune! You are becoming quite skilled with the vocaloids. The chorus, in particular, really soars. Excellent production, as usual. Outstanding work!!

Deej

P.S. Your summary description of the song on SoundClick may have a typo you want to correct. It reads: "I immediately was attacked to one called "Across the Jordan" ..." Did you mean to say "attracted" instead of "attacked"?

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Originally Posted by Deej56
Dan,

Beautiful tune! You are becoming quite skilled with the vocaloids. The chorus, in particular, really soars. Excellent production, as usual. Outstanding work!!

Deej

P.S. Your summary description of the song on SoundClick may have a typo you want to correct. It reads: "I immediately was attacked to one called "Across the Jordan" ..." Did you mean to say "attracted" instead of "attacked"?
Thanks Deej...yeah it didn't actually "attack" me...thanks for catching that...I appreciate it...Dan


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Hi, Dan.

Cool arrangement!

And of course, you've got the obligatory key changes to remind us it's your music. wink

I found the lead pulled to the side channel a bit distracting, but not a big deal.

Great work, as usual.


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Hi Dan,

There are few things in life one can almost always count on - you delivering a gorgeous, well-thought-out song is one of them. Everything is pristine and so enjoyable.

You have excellent command of the synth voices. That was such a pleasant listen.

Best to you & yours,

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Hi Dan,

Wow, what a great sound! Top notch in all aspects, sounds wonderful through the 'phones.

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Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Dan.
Cool arrangement!
And of course, you've got the obligatory key changes to remind us it's your music. wink
I found the lead pulled to the side channel a bit distracting, but not a big deal.
Great work, as usual.
David...thanks...aren't all songs supposed have at least one key change in them? anyway...mine do...Dan

Originally Posted by Al-David
Hi Dan,
There are few things in life one can almost always count on - you delivering a gorgeous, well-thought-out song is one of them. Everything is pristine and so enjoyable.
You have excellent command of the synth voices. That was such a pleasant listen.
Best to you & yours,
Alan
Alan...thank you so much...Dan
Originally Posted by vicarn
Really nice, Dan.
Not sure about the bass rhythm at first as it seemed to be at odds with the vocal and synth.
As the song progressed though, it sounded fine.
Another good one.
Vic
Thanks Vic...you were right about the beginning of the vocal...I tried to clean the up and coordinate it a bit better...thanks for noticing...Dan


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Well done all around.
The sparse mix worked well and sounded excellent on the monitors.

The rich imagery of the lyric just begs for a video.
Arranging that harmony must have taken some time.
Along with the phrasing nuances and vibrato.

Well done and you certainly did justice to your friend's poem.

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