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When you realise that the problem lies with you......

A ballad this time, been messing with this for a little while now, and I feel it still needs work but wanted to get it out there!

Thank you for taking the time to have a listen, its really appreciated................As usual please feel free to critique as you feel fit, it all helps, good or bad!

Regards
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Title: Forgiveness On The Wind
File:Forgiveness On The Wind.SGU
Key=Db , Tempo 83, Length (m:s)=3:19
No intro. 65 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 65. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
Soloist track has 145 notes, Soloist harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,
Style is _CBALDBR.STY (Country Ballad w/ Baritone Guita)

RealTracks in style: 366:Bass, Electric, Country Ev 065
RealTracks in style: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~362:Guitar, Acoustic, Strumming Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 2444:Guitar, Baritone Electric, Background PopCountryBrent Ev 085
RealTracks in song: 2001:Pedal Steel, Soloist CountryPaul Ev 085
RealDrums in style:NashvilleEven8^2-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, HiHat


Forgiveness On The Wind

[Verse]
The sun sinks low behind the pines,
I hear your voice in the whispers of time.
I see your shadow in the firelight's glow,
The weight in my heart just won’t let go.

[Verse 2]
I recall the words I should have said,
But pride got in the way instead.
I broke the bridge we worked to build,
Now the empty silence can't be filled.

[Chorus]
Forgiveness on the wind, can you hear it call?
I was the one to stumble, I made us fall.
If I could turn back time or start anew,
I'd walk this road just to find you.

[Verse 3]
Your photograph rests on the window sill,
The memories linger, and they haunt me still.
If you would give me one more chance,
I'd hold your heart like a sacred dance.

[Bridge]
I know sorry’s more than just a word,
It's in the actions, it's being heard.
But from this distance, I can only pray,
That you'll find my heart in the songs I play.

[Chorus]
Forgiveness on the wind, can you hear it call?
I was the one to stumble, I made us fall.
If I could turn back time or start anew,
I'd walk this road just to find you.

Last edited by PeteMcN; 04/28/25 05:50 AM.

Sometimes you just have to say f### it and do it anyway!

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That was very pretty and such a romantically sad sentiment about lessons learned.

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Originally Posted by BYOBand
That was very pretty and such a romantically sad sentiment about lessons learned.

Thank you much appreciated


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Wonderful lryics, Pete. Very relatable. Excellent vocal and mix. Heart-wrenching reality.


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Hi, Pete.

Good write, smooth production, nice vocals.

It's got a classic sound - I enjoyed the listen.


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An outstanding ballad.
Great vocal, backing band, and mix.
Country at its best.


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Originally Posted by MarioD
An outstanding ballad.
Great vocal, backing band, and mix.
Country at its best.


Originally Posted by dcuny
Hi, Pete.

Good write, smooth production, nice vocals.

It's got a classic sound - I enjoyed the listen.






Originally Posted by BabuMusic
Wonderful lryics, Pete. Very relatable. Excellent vocal and mix. Heart-wrenching reality.

Thank you all for these lovely comments. I really do appreciate them.

Regards

Pete


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Great country ballad. I like the instrumentation, arrangement and production.

Last edited by WaoBand; 04/29/25 03:03 PM.

Some favourite Waoist Adages:
#1: Play on the Way.
#13: Ask not for whom the flower blooms, it blooms for you.
#58: Bring consciousness to it.
#63: On the road to effortlessness, effort must be made.
#92: Be Love Now, the rest will come on its own.
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Great song and wonderful track, enjoyed everything about it!

I did have one thought about an alternative ending…after the instrumental solo, it might be interesting to reduce the band to basic minimums, let the voice ring out the first 2 lines of the final verse, then kick in with the mix as you have it…kind of a way to isolate that heartfelt confession, then wind up with a bang!

Anyway, I think it’s first class just as it is!


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Really good lyrics, really good vocals. I think you're the Keith Urban of Great Britain. Excellent work.


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Good song with a strong chorus. This a song that the King could have recorded. I like the title.

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