Previous Thread
Index
Next Thread
Print Thread
Go To
User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
PeteMcN Offline OP
Apprentice
OP Offline
Apprentice
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
Hi peeps,

I wanted to try writing an 'Old Fashioned' Cowboy song, and this is the result, its not particularly deep but I enjoyed the process and I hope you enjoy the end result!

Pete



LYRICS

In the dusty old saloon, where the memories are strewn,
Sits a weathered cowboy with a heartache he can't tame.
His eyes tell a story, of a life filled with glory,
But the regrets of his past keep haunting him all the same.

Oh, the whiskey trails and cowboy tales,
They're all that's left for this lonely soul to hold.
Through the desert sunsets, he can't forget,
The love he lost and the dreams that turned to gold.
Oh, the whiskey trails and cowboy tales,
They're all that's left for this lonely soul to hold.

He once rode the ranges, with his heart full of changes,
But the wild horses couldn't tame his restless soul.
Now he's wandering and wondering, about the love he's squandered,
In the lonely nights, where the wind whispers secrets untold.

Oh, the whiskey trails and cowboy tales,
They're all that's left for this lonely soul to hold.
Through the desert sunsets, he can't forget,
The love he lost and the dreams that turned to gold.
Oh, the whiskey trails and cowboy tales,
They're all that's left for this lonely soul to hold.

In the (moonlight's) glow, he's a (shadow) on the go,
Chasing (ghosts) of the past, that he can't outrun.
With each (sunset) fading, his (heart) keeps on breaking,
For the (love) he let go, and the (damage) he has done.

Chorus:
Oh, the (whiskey trails) and (cowboy tales),
They're all that's left for this (lonely) soul to hold.
Through the (desert) sunsets, he can't forget,
The (love) he lost and the (dreams) that turned to gold.

Outro:
As the (night) grows colder, he's a (wandering) soldier,
In the (wild) West, where his (heart) still yearns to be.
But the (regrets) keep on calling, and the (teardrops) keep falling,
For the (cowboy) who'll never find his (peace) or be free.

BIAB Info:-

Title: Whiskey Trails and Cowboy Tales V2
File:Whiskey Trails and Cowboy Tales V3.01.SGU
Key=E , Tempo 82, Length (m:s)=3:27
8 bar intro, 59 bar chorus, from bar 9 to bar 67. Repeat x1 chorus
No Melody
Soloist track has 69 notes, Soloist harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Song is saved with bar changes for Volume Changes,
Style is _BYNIGHT.STY (By Night Dreamy Country Ballad)

RealTracks in style: ~2482:Bass, Acoustic, Bowed Held Ev 085
RealTracks in style: ~2503:Piano, Acoustic, HeldChords 085
RealTracks in song: ~365:Guitar, Acoustic, Fingerpicking Ev 085
RealTracks in style: 2667:Pedal Steel, Background DreamySingleNote Ev 075
RealTracks in song: 3198:Guitar, Acoustic, Soloist PopBalladBrent Ev 065
RealTracks in song: 3198:Guitar, Acoustic, Soloist PopBalladBrent Ev 065
RealDrums in style:NashvilleEven8^1-a:Sidestick, HiHat , b:Snare, Ride


Sometimes you just have to say f### it and do it anyway!

Proud Scotsman 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 now residing in England
User Showcase
Joined: May 2019
Posts: 4,991
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2019
Posts: 4,991
You're right, Pete. The reward is in the process, and your listeners are rewarded by your creative efforts. Man, I am really enjoying my reward with this one. Excellent lyrics and a great delivery. This song is perfect for the end of the credits to a best-selling cowboy movie, the crowd walking out carrying the magic of the old west with them and some are staying, not to see who played what in the film, but to hear the rest of the song. I sit with them.


Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/@babumusic51
SoundCloud: https://soundcloud.com/marty-straub
Band in a Box, Reaper, Cakewalk, Ozone 12, EZDrummer
User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
PeteMcN Offline OP
Apprentice
OP Offline
Apprentice
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
Originally Posted by BabuMusic
You're right, Pete. The reward is in the process, and your listeners are rewarded by your creative efforts. Man, I am really enjoying my reward with this one. Excellent lyrics and a great delivery. This song is perfect for the end of the credits to a best-selling cowboy movie, the crowd walking out carrying the magic of the old west with them and some are staying, not to see who played what in the film, but to hear the rest of the song. I sit with them.

Marty, I'm sat here kinda lost for words ( ironic really!!) thank you doesn't seem to cover it imo, but I hope you'll accept it non the less brother.

As over the top as this will sound, your critique gave me a very warm glow!

You hit the nail on the head, as it was after watching an old cowboy movie that the idea came to me lol. I really wanted to have like an orchestral mix but as I'm useless with midi and BIAB is a little short on orchestral styles I decided to go with this.

Bless you and take care

Pete


Sometimes you just have to say f### it and do it anyway!

Proud Scotsman 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 now residing in England
User Showcase
Joined: May 2023
Posts: 2,183
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: May 2023
Posts: 2,183
I really think this song has a great potential if performed by a live band. The BiaB arrangement is nice and simple and it doesn't need more than that, but I see a potential in it if it was professionally produce and a little longer.


Some favourite Waoist Adages:
#1: Play on the Way.
#13: Ask not for whom the flower blooms, it blooms for you.
#58: Bring consciousness to it.
#63: On the road to effortlessness, effort must be made.
#92: Be Love Now, the rest will come on its own.
User Showcase
Joined: Nov 2008
Posts: 3,554
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Nov 2008
Posts: 3,554
Pete, super job on your cowboy tune! Very strong vocals, and the BiaB backing delivers the goods with just enough variation to keep it interesting. Some added harmonies and/or BGVs would really make the song take off. Just sounds like that kind of song. Do the lyrics in () signify anything for the listener? Tried to interpret them a couple of different ways but couldn't crack the code.

As they said in the Old West, or at least movies about the Old West, "Giddyup!".


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
ASUS I9-12900K DAW, 32 GB RAM
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)
User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
PeteMcN Offline OP
Apprentice
OP Offline
Apprentice
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
Originally Posted by WaoBand
I really think this song has a great potential if performed by a live band. The BiaB arrangement is nice and simple and it doesn't need more than that, but I see a potential in it if it was professionally produce and a little longer.

Thanks mate, really appreciate your comments. I'd genuinely love to hear it with a live band, I think the dynamics would certainly be enhanced. I'm glad you like the simple arrangement that was my intention at the start of this project. I was thinking of adding a simple guitar break and extending the changes by a bar in places as they seem to run from the verse to the chorus rather quickly. I was just wary of losing the flow, however the more I listen the more I feel there is perhaps room to play with if you get my drift.

Once again, thank you for your comment👍


Sometimes you just have to say f### it and do it anyway!

Proud Scotsman 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 now residing in England
User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
PeteMcN Offline OP
Apprentice
OP Offline
Apprentice
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
Originally Posted by DC Ron
Pete, super job on your cowboy tune! Very strong vocals, and the BiaB backing delivers the goods with just enough variation to keep it interesting. Some added harmonies and/or BGVs would really make the song take off. Just sounds like that kind of song. Do the lyrics in () signify anything for the listener? Tried to interpret them a couple of different ways but couldn't crack the code.

As they said in the Old West, or at least movies about the Old West, "Giddyup!".

Thanks Ron, I agree it needs harmonies but they are most Def NOT my strong point vocally!!!

Now as to the lyrics in () ....... I'm so sorry you've been racking your brains as to what the possible meaning is to the listener....... They are just visual notes to myself where I've rewritten certain words, no code to crack my friend!!!!

Pete👍


Sometimes you just have to say f### it and do it anyway!

Proud Scotsman 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 now residing in England
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2010
Posts: 2,369
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2010
Posts: 2,369
Really nice work, so relaxed and enjoyable. I esp liked how you simplified the mix on the last chorus, letting the vocal and lyric stand out.

My only suggestion..the line that starts “But the REgrets keep on calling” puts the emphasis in an awkward place. I’d replace it with “But regrets, they keep on calling”…that would sound smoother and more natural.

Thanks for sharing your high quality work with us!!


Windows 11, Intel Core i5-8600T 2.3Ghz, 16 gig ram, BIAB 2025 MegaPak, SampleTank 4, Keystation49 Kybd, Neewer NW-800 mic
User Showcase
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 24,530
Veteran
Offline
Veteran
Joined: Dec 2003
Posts: 24,530
Pete, WOW what a fantastic song
Outstanding vocal and lyrics
Fantastic chord progression
Great arrangement
Perfect backing band
IMHO this is your best to date


The bumper sticker said "I'm a veterinarian, therefore I can drive like an animal".
Suddenly I realized how many proctologists are on the road.

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware
User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
PeteMcN Offline OP
Apprentice
OP Offline
Apprentice
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
Originally Posted by Tano Music
Really nice work, so relaxed and enjoyable. I esp liked how you simplified the mix on the last chorus, letting the vocal and lyric stand out.

My only suggestion..the line that starts “But the REgrets keep on calling” puts the emphasis in an awkward place. I’d replace it with “But regrets, they keep on calling”…that would sound smoother and more natural.

Thanks for sharing your high quality work with us!!

Thank you for your comment, you are indeed correct about that particular line... It does sound awkward and I shall drop 'The' from it and run with your suggestion👍


Sometimes you just have to say f### it and do it anyway!

Proud Scotsman 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 now residing in England
User Showcase
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
PeteMcN Offline OP
Apprentice
OP Offline
Apprentice
Joined: Jul 2017
Posts: 200
Originally Posted by MarioD
Pete, WOW what a fantastic song
Outstanding vocal and lyrics
Fantastic chord progression
Great arrangement
Perfect backing band
IMHO this is your best to date

Mario, you are much too kind sir! Thank you bro 👍


Sometimes you just have to say f### it and do it anyway!

Proud Scotsman 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁳󠁣󠁴󠁿 now residing in England
Previous Thread
Next Thread
Go To

Link Copied to Clipboard
ChatPG

Ask sales and support questions about Band-in-a-Box using natural language.

ChatPG's knowledge base includes the full Band-in-a-Box User Manual and sales information from the website.

PG Music News
Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac® users: Build 904 now available!

If you're already using Band-in-a-Box® 2025 for Mac®, make sure to grab the latest update! Build 904 is now available for download and includes the newest additions and enhancements from our team.

Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows® users: Build 1237 is now available!

Already a Band-in-a-Box 2026 for Windows user? Stay up to date and download the build 1237 to get all the latest additions and enhancements.

PowerTracks Pro 2026 for Windows is Here!

PowerTracks 2026 is here—bringing powerful new enhancements designed to make your production workflow faster, smoother, and more intuitive than ever.

The enhanced Mixer now shows Track Type and Instrument icons for instant track recognition, while a new grid option simplifies editing views. Non-floating windows adopt a modern title bar style, replacing the legacy blue bar.

The Master Volume is now applied at the end of the audio chain for consistent levels and full-signal master effects.

Tablature now includes a “Save bends when saving XML” option for improved compatibility with PG Music tools. Plus, you can instantly match all track heights with a simple Ctrl-release after resizing, and Add2 chords from MGU/SGU files are now fully supported... and more!

Get started today—first-time packages start at just $49.

Already using PowerTracks Pro Audio? Upgrade for as little as $29 and enjoy the latest improvements!

Order now!

Band-in-a-Box 2026 for Windows Special Offers End Tomorrow (January 15th, 2026) at 11:59 PM PST!

Time really is running out! Save up to 50% on Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows® upgrades and receive a FREE Bonus PAK—only when you order by 11:59 PM PST on Thursday, January 15, 2026!

We've added many major new features and new content in a redesigned Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows®!

Version 2026 introduces a modernized GUI redesign across the program, with updated toolbars, refreshed windows, smoother workflows, and a new Dark Mode option. There’s also a new side toolbar for quicker access to commonly used windows, and the new Multi-View feature lets you arrange multiple windows as layered panels without overlap, making it easier to customize your workspace.

Another exciting new addition is the new AI-Notes feature, which can transcribe polyphonic audio into MIDI. You can view the results in notation or play them back as MIDI, and choose whether to process an entire track or focus on specific parts like drums, bass, guitars/piano, or vocals. There's over 100 new features in Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows®.

There's an amazing collection of new content too, including 202 RealTracks, new RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, “Songs with Vocals” Artist Performance Sets, Playable RealTracks Set 5, two RealDrums Stems sets, XPro Styles PAK 10, Xtra Styles PAK 21, and much more!

Upgrade your Band-in-a-Box for Windows to save up to 50% on most Band-in-a-Box® 2026 upgrade packages!

Plus, when you order your Band-in-a-Box® 2026 upgrade during our special, you'll receive a Free Bonus PAK of exciting new add-ons.

If you need any help deciding which package is the best option for you, just let us know. We are here to help!

Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows® Special Offers Extended Until January 15, 2026!

Good news! You still have time to upgrade to the latest version of Band-in-a-Box® for Windows® and save. Our Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows® special now runs through January 15, 2025!

We've packed Band-in-a-Box® 2026 with major new features, enhancements, and an incredible lineup of new content! The program now sports a sleek, modern GUI redesign across the entire interface, including updated toolbars, refreshed windows, smoother workflows, a new dark mode option, and more. The brand-new side toolbar provides quicker access to key windows, while the new Multi-View feature lets you arrange multiple windows as layered panels without overlap, creating a flexible, clutter-free workspace. We have an amazing new “AI-Notes” feature. This transcribes polyphonic audio into MIDI so you can view it in notation or play it back as MIDI. You can process an entire track (all pitched instruments and drums) or focus on individual parts like drums, bass, guitars/piano, or vocals. There's an amazing collection of new content too, including 202 RealTracks, new RealStyles, MIDI SuperTracks, Instrumental Studies, “Songs with Vocals” Artist Performance Sets, Playable RealTracks Set 5, two RealDrums Stems sets, XPro Styles PAK 10, Xtra Styles PAK 21, and much more!

There are over 100 new features in Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows®.

When you order purchase Band-in-a-Box® 2026 before 11:59 PM PST on January 15th, you'll also receive a Free Bonus PAK packed with exciting new add-ons.

Upgrade to Band-in-a-Box® 2026 for Windows® today! Check out the Band-in-a-Box® packages page for all the purchase options available.

Happy New Year!

Thank you for being part of the Band-in-a-Box® community.

Wishing you and yours a very happy 2026—Happy New Year from all of us at PG Music!

Season's Greetings!

Wishing everyone a happy, healthy holiday season—thanks for being part of our community!

The office will be closed for Christmas Day, but we will be back on Boxing Day (Dec 26th) at 6:00am PST.

Team PG

Forum Statistics
Forums57
Topics86,050
Posts799,404
Members40,019
Most Online44,367
Mar 4th, 2026
Newest Members
LeoCento, kimmolsn25, addsomebottom, m3talmud, Chunie
40,018 Registered Users
Top Posters(30 Days)
MarioD 148
DC Ron 102
rsdean 98
DrDan 73
WaoBand 70
Today's Birthdays
Bob Hunt, C J Lane, freeman, Philsaxophone
Powered by UBB.threads™ PHP Forum Software 7.7.5