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Soundcloud link GOODBYE Bandcamp link GOODBYE I know it's a title that's been overused and probably used several times in this forum. I've had this one in my back pocket for a while but have been reluctant to share because I've only got one BIAB track involved. Nevertheless, I decided to share because of the amount of work that has gone into producing it! This one was inspired by my co-writer Ron Helm's past work as a hospice chaplain and in particular individuals he has ministered to who strongly emphasized that they didn't want their loved ones worrying about them because they were ready for what lay ahead of them! I played all instruments with the exception of the BIAB Cajon Folk Slow 8's Realdrums track which was used in the verses and first and second chorus I also used EZ Keys for the main electric piano track and Drums On Demand Ron and I are both so appreciative of your time to listen and comment! Goodbye Torrey Bliss/Ron Helm ©2025 Glass Gate Music BMI The sadness fades As you start a brand new day The sunrise comes and it takes you away I know that time is sleeping And slipping away Our last breath here Will be our first breath there Goodbye don't cry I'll be alright I'll wait there for you Where we'll walk in the light Now and then Sometimes you will think of me I'll show up in ways That only you can see Though time slips away You'll still see reflections of me Look up believe with Jesus Is where I'll be Goodbye don't cry I'll be alright I'll wait there for you Where we'll walk in the light It may seem you're near the end of the road Just know it's not the end We're not walking alone The Lord is taking you to A place that we can't comprehend Goodbye don't cry I'll be alright I'll wait there for you Where we'll walk in the light
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Pretty good song, reminds me of someone, but I just can't figure out who. Although you claim that you still need to work a little more on the mixing, the song is already in pretty good shape. And your vocals and playing are really good. Minor things I would probably look at: - The intro is ace, but it doesn't relate to the rest of the song. I would remove it and save it for a song that it fits better with sonically. - The vocals have a slight but sometimes distracting distortion in the high frequency range. But, as I said, it's already very good and I like it ![[Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]](https://www.pgmusic.com/forums/images/icons/default/thumbs_up.gif)
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Torrey,
You have a real touch with intricate and complex melodic lines. No one does it better. Love the playing, production and the way you frame the message for this excellent song. Your singing is really strong - one of your best vocals.
GREAT!
Bob
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Hi Torrey,
Yes, we did a song called Goodbye many years ago. Very different than yours of course!
Love your melody lines, and that bass line is fabulous. Not too shabby on the guitar either! Excellent vocal!
Good song, enjoyed the listen!
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A very nice intro, and the rest is also very good. Excellent work on the vocals and accompaniment.
I enjoyed listening to it.
Laurent
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Pretty good song, reminds me of someone, but I just can't figure out who. Although you claim that you still need to work a little more on the mixing, the song is already in pretty good shape. And your vocals and playing are really good. Minor things I would probably look at: - The intro is ace, but it doesn't relate to the rest of the song. I would remove it and save it for a song that it fits better with sonically. - The vocals have a slight but sometimes distracting distortion in the high frequency range. But, as I said, it's already very good and I like it Thanks for having a listen, I appreciate it! As to the intro, I'm satisfied with it! I feel it has purpose because it fits my vision for the song. It avoids a sudden harsh launch into the vocals and is a foreshadowing of the arpeggiated guitars in the chorus! TB
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Caramba! I had no idea you'd passed on, Torrey!  "Just know it's not the end" is exactly right. Great song all around.
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Cool one, Torrey. Love the vocal arrangement and the America-style harmonies/background vocals. Strong lead vocals make some tricky lines fall right in place, too. Liked the "dream sequence" opening and the long fadeout at the end. Super lead guitar fills, too.
Very polished and fun to listen to, as usual.
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Too many guitars (is that a thing?)
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SMOOTH Torrey - as needed and expected given the narrative/genesis of the song.
Touches of Steely Dan perhaps.
Very cool lead work too.
Cheers
rayc
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Hi, Torrey. Solid all the way through. Sonically interesting intro and outro, excellent vocals - sounds great! Upbeat for a sad topic - good write. Strong chorus - catchy and gets the message across. Love the harmonies. Did I mention the guitars? So much to like here. 
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Hi Torrey!
I like the intro and outro, and your guitar fills in between. In fact, is the guitar run into the chorus a nod to ‘Hello goodbye’? The proximity of the word ‘goodbye’ to this run is what made me think.
A really good song with lots of Easter eggs in it.
Andrew
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Torrey,
You have a real touch with intricate and complex melodic lines. No one does it better. Love the playing, production and the way you frame the message for this excellent song. Your singing is really strong - one of your best vocals.
GREAT!
Bob Thanks Bob! Your comments always mean a lot to me! TB
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I haven't visited this forum in quite some time... but the first artist I looked for was you...
I always love your impressive style and delivery... Tops...♫
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Hi Torrey.
You and Ron have done a really great job with the music and lyrics. This is a very entertaining, easy-to-listen-to track. Your instrumental work and your vocals are as amazing as they always are. And the arrangement, mix and production are excellent. It is always a pleasure to listen to your contributions to the forum. Honestly, you are very talented in so many musical ways!
I thoroughly enjoyed this..
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Torrey,
You never disappoint. Love the arrangement. Your vocals are always top shelf, as is your playing. Ya did good!
Take care,
Alan
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Hi Torrey,
Yes, we did a song called Goodbye many years ago. Very different than yours of course!
Love your melody lines, and that bass line is fabulous. Not too shabby on the guitar either! Excellent vocal!
Good song, enjoyed the listen! Thanks Dave! Your comments are a bright spot in my day! TB
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Torrey, this is so good I don't know where to start
Outstanding vocal and arrangement
Super backing band and mix
Loved it
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Hi Torrey
Loved the swirling opening, sets the listener up for a big number. It takes from all the best 80's power ballad genre. A nicely polished production, well and a good write. Very enjoyable, kind regards
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A very nice intro, and the rest is also very good. Excellent work on the vocals and accompaniment.
I enjoyed listening to it.
Laurent Thanks so much for taking time to have a listen and comment! I appreciate it! TB
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I like this song. So much is good about it.
Just my opinion: I think you should revisit the mix. On my system, it doesn't sound clean. I went through to see that I wasn't running anything at 100% thereby causing the issue on my end, I wasn't. There is a distorted quality to the mix like you have gain staging set up wrong or have it overly compressed/limited/maximized in the outputs.... Anyway, I'd have a look at that, remove the plugs and remix it.
You can find my music at: www.herbhartley.comAdd nothing that adds nothing to the music. You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both. The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.
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