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Hi Everyone, Here is a song I wrote http://www.box.net/shared/bvsdcgncy0The words are: Verse 1 Well you crossed the line And you didn't come And you knew that I would be waiting for you So I change my clothes And I go to bed And I hope that soon I'll be fast asleep But no dreaming of you And I wake up a new man Chorus Hey, I don't want to love again No more sadness with so much pain Hey, I can go my own way Survive and not go astray Verse 2 Be strong without I close out the tears And I shut out the fears Filter out the past I won't wait again And suffer in vain And the world can run dry Before again I will cry There's no point to the game Now I know you're to blame Chorus Verse 3 Well you crossed the line And you didn't come And you knew that I would be waiting for you I won't wait again And suffer in vain No dreaming of you And I wake up a new man There's no point to the game Now I know you're to blame Chorus Hope you like it Jim
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Hi Jim, You've been very productive with your songwriting! You've really assembled a great backing track in this one. Your confidence is shining through in both vocals and arrangement. One thing that stood out to me was the reverb on the vocals. I found myself wondering if clarity would be enhanced by backing off the reverb a little bit. That's my personal taste though and I know that at different times in the history of music, use of reverb has changed dramatically. Overall, good job  Noel
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Very fine blues. I would definitely come down on that guitar possibly taking out some of those lower mids and pan it off to the left away from the vocal. Could profit from some piano, and perhaps some percussion punctuation at the very end (where the piece sounds a little chopped off). The great thing about today's technology is that we can keep going back and trying different things.
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Thanks Noel,
I used the setting for the reverb I normally use - but I will look at that again.
Thanks for your kind comments
Jim
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Thanks George and pleased you liked the song.
You have some good suggestions concerning the guitar. May be some piano also - I play piano on almost every song I write so no problem.
Thanks again
Jim
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Nice blues tune. Very well done. Excellent production! Thanks for sharing! Listen To My MusicRead My Blog
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GREAT BLUES! Strong vocal with good lyrics.
Personally I would remix this one as I think the balance of the backing tracks are off. I would lower the volume of the guitar then bring up the volume on all of the other instruments, especially the blues harp when it is taking a riff. After remixing the backing tracks I would look at the vocal reverb. It sounds like there is too much right now but that may be due to the fact that the vocal is so far out front. Again this may be just me.
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Hi PgFantastic and Mario, Pg: Thanks for your comments and pleased you liked it. Mario: Pleased you liked the song. I remixed so may be you would like to listen and see what you think. The following is the remix http://www.box.net/shared/u6e27plzzzThanks again Jim
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Thanks for listening Danny and pleased you liked it.
Jim
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Another blocked site - will have to check later. Darnit!
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Hi Mike,
Hope you check later Mike - site almost always available - just unlucky when you tried. Thanks for trying.
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MUCH MUCH BETTER
To nit-pick I would cut way back on vocal’s reverb. IMHO the vocal doesn’t sound like it’s in the same room as the band and it’s muddying up the mix. Again thought that is just me and others may differ.
It’s still a super blues song!
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Hi Mario, Thanks for listening again. I have just uploaded a new version with vocal put back a little - same link as the one above i.e. http://www.box.net/shared/u6e27plzzzI would appreciate if you would listen again and tell me what you think. Your comments much appreciated Jim
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The blend is much better. I still think that the vocal has too much reverb but that is just my opinion, others will vary. I know that you stated this is your normal reverb setting but I have found out that there is no normal setting for any effect. The effect(s) and the level of effect(s) change for every song and sometimes even during the song.
Either way this is going into my keeper folder.
Great job on this one.
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Great!
Wonderful blues, love the guitar, love the vocal, it's just great. I know that mastering does a lot, but I'm sure that musicians like my self can hear when something is special:-) Your guitar playing tells you've been in this a long time:-)
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Hi Mario and Stratocaster,
Mario: Thank you for listening again Mario and helping with the mix. I think I will stick with this last version - I like it much better than my first mix.
Statocaster: Thanks for you very kind comments and I am very pleased you liked it.
Thanks again and your comments are much appreciated
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Jim. This is very cool sounding. I like the reverb. What I would do is put the guitar on some reverb. It's too dry and outstanding compared to the vocals and the rest of the music. Love the night club feel you've got going on here. It's  far as I'm concerned.
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Hi Russ,
Thanks for listening and your suggestions about the guitar. Very pleased you enjoyed it and gave the thumbs up - really appreciate your comments.
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