In the context of 50/90, most songs are pretty fun and even good. However, outside of 50/90 (in the "real" world), they can seem pretty crappy (ha, ha). This might be one of those.
OK, I finally did a 50/90 song with some BIAB in there. I can't take it too seriously because it was basically a dream I had and I stayed pretty much with whatever the dream gave me. I struggled with the timing going back into the final chorus from the bridge, but that is the way it goes sometimes!
I Had a Dream Last Night (c) Emmrich 2013
Note: if 50/90 is acting up, here's a souncloud link:
https://soundcloud.com/kevin-emmrich/i-had-a-dream-last-night(verse)
had a dream last night
about writing a song
took it to my mentor
said I had it all wrong
sent me to a tune master
who lived up a hill
in a mansion by a lake
to help me with my skills
(chorus)
Oh song master teach me your magic
I want to write a classic
and I want to do it now
Time is fleeting
and while I'm still breathing
I want to learn how
(verse)
Now this master looked
like a cross between
the kung fu panda guru
and a house scammer on TV
What could this master do?
'cause the next part was cliché
he left on a boat
with a couple of hot young babes
(CHORUS AGAIN)
(instrumental: verse and chorus)
(BRIDGE)
Suddenly I could see the final words
but I couldn't make them out
there goes my one big hit
so I'll just have to shout
(CHORUS AGAIN)
Kevin: acoustic guitars, vocals, harmonica, tambourine and handclaps
BIAB: 592:Bass, Acoustic Bluegrass Doc Ev 100
BIAB: CountryTrain: a: Brushes Soft b: Brushes Hard