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Great Song Bob, I love everything about this and the vocalist sure does the song justice. Great lyrics and good melody line, and the mix is good too.
I sure hope that somebody picks up on it for you.
Musiclover Thanks for the kind remarks. Appreciate it. Regards, Bob
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Bart liked the song, but suggested some major changes. Like cutting the steel guitar and dobro. Problem is, there isn't any steel guitar or dobro on the recording.  WOW.... I literally laughed out loud....I've always been suspicious of those so-called hit writers who work at NSAI and the other services offered in this business....and the advice they give.... one says up, the next one says down.....the next one says white, the next one says black.... You have to wonder sometimes did they even listen to the song. It's pretty obvious there's no dobro or steel in that. As you recall, the only comments I had was to add some polish and shorten the intro.... the song was mighty fine..... mighty fine. Bob....Was that a one on one mentor or a basic review? I did a one on one mentoring with RC Bannon on a song when he was the president out there.... We discussed 2 songs and he was telling me MAJOR changes and re-writes were needed on the first two.... structural stuff...lyrical stuff...... then with about 12 minutes remaining in the 1 on 1, I asked him to review one more song quickly. After he listened, unlike the first two, he appeared to really like the song and suggested a few changes.... the main one being get another singer who can "sell the song convincingly"... and so I did. Made a few of the other changes.... minor things that he suggested like cut the solo out and do a simple quick turnaround back to the chorus, and sent it back in. The only problem was....well, RC wasn't on the list of reviewers.... he did mentoring but not reviews. So it was a tossup.... I picked a country song reviewer and sent it in with some basic info on what RC had suggested and what I did.... I was expecting a decent review and perhaps a recommendation....at least a "ones to watch" posting..... nope... I'm glad I didn't make a bet on that.... because this new review tore that song a new one.... up one side and down the other....I've gotten better reviews from rough first drafts than I did from that polished up and re-worked song.... FYI the song in question I'm referring to is Come & Go (Rose Version) Kinda makes you just want to throw your hands up and pull your hair out from the pure frustration “Bob....Was that a one on one mentor or a basic review?” It was a response to my complaint about a horrible “Pitch To Publisher”, when the “publisher” (actually a gum-chewing, baseball cap-wearing, word-slurring, knuckle-dragging Millennial cretin with 0 credits to his name) had given the song short shrift. After my complaint, I got a response from Bart. Obviously, he either didn't listen to the song, or the underling who did the “critique” for him can't tell a Telecaster from a pedal steel.  NSAI is not in the music business. They are in what I call the “Music Business Business”. It is what it is. Regards, Bob
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Bob,
Well done. Very enjoyable. Great BGVs.
SD Thanks SD. Regards, Bob
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Well done! Love the chorus hook. And the mix and instruments are spot on.
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Well done! Love the chorus hook. And the mix and instruments are spot on. Lawrence, Thanks for listening and the kind words. Regards, Bob
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Hi Bob.
I'm weighing in late as usual and of course it's all been said...
but for what it's worth I thought it was brilliant.
Plus what everyone else said.
ROG.
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Hi Bob.
I'm weighing in late as usual and of course it's all been said...
but for what it's worth I thought it was brilliant.
Plus what everyone else said.
ROG. Thanks Professor. Appreciate the listen. Regards, Bob
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Bob, Just thought I would comment again to this megalith type post Gonna have a big time, big time, big time in this small town tonight. The song is making the rounds in Nashville in search of a publisher, and has received generally favorable reviews. It did make the “Ones To Watch” list in January on the N.S.A.I. “E.A.R.S' report, and I got a personal critique from Bart Herbison, the Executive Director of NSAI.
I received a lot of valid suggestions, and am aware that it could be greatly improved, but I feel that as a simple song demo it is adequate.
If nothing happens with the song, we will still be performing it on the 2015 90 dB Dive Bar World Tour, where it will be heard by tens of people. grin Hmmmm Sounds just as good on the 2nd listen so maybe it is I that could borrow $ 73.78 USD ( at the current exchange rates) Good luck with the song Alyn
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Thanks Alyn. If I had $ 73.78 USD, we wouldn't be on the 2015 90 dB Dive Bar World Tour! We'd be in Key west getting legless.
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We'd be in Key west getting legless. grin NOW that sounds a plan!! Alyn
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We'd be in Key west getting legless. grin NOW that sounds a plan!! Alyn We'll be right here: http://sloppyjoes.com/
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Bob, I'll try not to rehash what's already been said but won't make any promises.  I've been away from the boards for a few weeks and then hear this as the first song coming back.. To put it mildly, I was gobsmacked. To understand how big of a statement that is, consider this: I've been a guitarist for well over 4 decades and have invested TONS of time and thousands of dollars on music gear. I've learned and play several styles fluently. As many excellent contributing members on the forum do, I recognize a strong production when the sound hits the ear canal. In other words, "When you've heard it all, it's hard to be this impressed with anything". Unless the piece really delivers the goods, of course. This song has it in spades. I enjoy listening to, and playing a tasteful guitar part based on the needs of a song as much as the next six-slinger. However, the songwriting, production and vocal performance on this number were so good that I didn't even MISS it. It really didn't matter. This is huge because I'm always zeroing in on everything that is going on (or not going on) musically speaking. I've listened to a good many Nashville demos back in the day and this tune is as good as any I've heard, then or now. You've done a really nice job at capturing a contemporary country feel to the song. Best wishes to you and your efforts pitching it.. I know as a seasoned musician, I was enjoying the whole vibe going on with it. I believe if it gets to the right artist, you have a great chance at getting a few more than tens of fans. David
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Bob, I'll try not to rehash what's already been said but won't make any promises. I've been away from the boards for a few weeks and then hear this as the first song coming back.. To put it mildly, I was gobsmacked. To understand how big of a statement that is, consider this: I've been a guitarist for well over 4 decades and have invested TONS of time and thousands of dollars on music gear. I've learned and play several styles fluently. As many excellent contributing members on the forum do, I recognize a strong production when the sound hits the ear canal. In other words, "When you've heard it all, it's hard to be this impressed with anything". Unless the piece really delivers the goods, of course. This song has it in spades. I enjoy listening to, and playing a tasteful guitar part based on the needs of a song as much as the next six-slinger. However, the songwriting, production and vocal performance on this number were so good that I didn't even MISS it. It really didn't matter. This is huge because I'm always zeroing in on everything that is going on (or not going on) musically speaking. I've listened to a good many Nashville demos back in the day and this tune is as good as any I've heard, then or now. You've done a really nice job at capturing a contemporary country feel to the song. Best wishes to you and your efforts pitching it.. I know as a seasoned musician, I was enjoying the whole vibe going on with it. I believe if it gets to the right artist, you have a great chance at getting a few more than tens of fans. David David, Thanks for the kind remarks and good wishes. I can take credit for the song, lyrics and arrangement - BUT: BIAB provided the players to bring it to life, and Brian Nolf (the singer) added the magic that only a seasoned pro can. Without those two entities, it would just be a little country folk song. The pitching continues apace. I pitched it to a lady in the frozen food aisle in the supermarket yesterday. She wasn't interested. Regards, Bob
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I agree, Bob. Points well taken. The song is a prime example of what is possible with the current incarnation of BIAB and/or RT and a pro singer (and a quality ear for arrangement as well as mix).
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