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Swingin' on a Chandelier

I started out with the BIAB InHuman.sty which got me a good foundation with the 528 acoustic guitar and them i added a piano which i played while changing some of the instruments including the 1036 Bass and the 2690 Guitar.

This is a song that i collaborated on with a new member Peter B. who added the lyrics and vocal demo. Before we put more time/money into the song we are looking for feedback in general and in particular to the genre that comes to your minds that would best fit the lyrics below

vs1a
Look at us, sittin’ pretty
Like we got the keys to the city
Oh , now! Oh, now!

vs1b
Yesterday, meals at the diner
Now today, coq au vin on china
Oh, now! Oh, now!

ch1
We’re a couple of kids from Nowhere
They thought we’d just disappear
We’re thumbin’ our noses at the nonbelievers
Oh, now! Oh, now! And we’re swingin’ on a chandelier

vs2a
There’s was never no relyin’ on luck
I counted on you and you counted on me
Now we’re goin’. Now we’re growin’. Oh

vs2b
Time to chill out and put our feet up
Forget the time’s you and me were beat up
Oh, they’ll never know. That’s just how it goes.

ch2
We’re a couple of kids from Nowhere
They thought we’d just disappear
We’re thumbin’ our noses at the nonbelievers
Oh, now! Oh, now! And we’re swingin’ on a chandelier

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ch3
We’re a couple of kids from Nowhere
They thought we’d just disappear
We’re thumbin’ our noses at the nonbelievers
Oh, now! Oh, now! And we’re swingin’ on a chandelier



Bob


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Hello Bob
this will be a great song
Of course it has to be a rock ballad
The melody gives a lot for it
But you have to play at least the guitar solo yourself if it is to be really very good.
the vocals should develop with the song and get stronger and stronger
really great
I am really excited about this song
great work Bob

As an example I recommend the song EVERYWHERE by SUNSTORM.

Wish you and your loved ones a Merry Christmas and a good and healthy start into the new year 2022

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Sounds really good, vocals song and arrangement are all very good. I have one concern that others may disagree with: there is already a mega-iconic song called Chandelier with billions of hits on youtube. I would pick a different lyric. Your melody is great, keep it. But I would lose the chandelier. Not that you would or could be sued, but Sia's song is already so implanted in almost everyone's mind. Again, let's hear what others have to say, I could be totally wrong. Still a great job with everything else on this project. I really liked the vocal, and pretty much the whole thing. Happy holidays!


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The intro made the think it was going to be a '60s style song.

To me, this sounds like a vocal + strummed guitar song as the main backbone.

That you chose not to go that direction was confusing, because I kept waiting for it to appear.

However, since I probably at least a couple of decades out of date on pop music, I'd take any feedback from me with a huge grain of salt.

Not commenting on the song itself, just on the arrangement.


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Hi Bob ...

I always enjoy your music. And I like this one a lot. Your vocal really shines ... but that's not unusual. I also love the minimal approach to the backing tracks. The piano really carries until the full band kicks in.

I enjoyed this a lot. The lyric takes me back a lot of years to my youth. That was in the late 40s and early 60s. Yeo, I'm an old fart, although I don't feel like one. I'll be 75 soon but don't feel much different than I did when I was 45.

Ya did good ... really good!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year ...

Alan


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The string thing on the left is, sort of, redundant...all it does for me is to bring Pachelbel's Canon into the story every now & then.
The style of the solo & it's tone are a tad too cliche for me.
The bones are good, I'd like to read the lyrics to get further into the thing.
It does sound like a basically mono song with a couple of outliers.

I think it'll be good...the draft vocals are not too shabby either.


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Very pretty song. Excellent vocal and lyric. Backtrack fit the song perfectly. Well done


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