Hi Steve,

I gotta say, this is an excellent arrangement and production. I can see what some of the posts were about regarding the vocals. You have a great voice pitch etc. I think the expectation due to the edginess of the solo, and the driving beat of the song is that the vocal should be a bit more bluesy and edgy. I can't find anything wrong with this song at all. It's been said that the lyrics are a little lite, but thats okay because of the message that the song is conveying. A raw edgy vocal in my opinion for what it's worth, would only enhance the song and make it more ready for mass media. Great job.

Rob

Dang....This is addicting.

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