Hey Robert!

Wow!!!!! This is VERY different from your usual style and you've done a great job putting it together. I've got to say that your performance is as confident and convincing as they come. In my opinion, this is excellent songwriting.

On the production side of things, I found myself wondering if you had tried leaving the blues sax out of the mix in the first verse and first chorus (and possibly the second verse as well). I've found that sometimes by saving something until a bit later in the arrangement, it helps to lift the energy of the song up a notch when it comes in. Stephen Webber (Grammy award winning producer and professor at Berklee College, Boston) calls this kind of technique "building a sonic emotional curve for the mix".

The above simply sprung to mind and I'm passing it on as food for thought, nothing more.

Once again, though, I think this is an exceptional effort!

All the best,
Noel


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