Matt, welcome.

For a first attempt this is very good. The only thing I didn’t care for was the piano lead; I thought that the banjo lead was spot on. IMHO this style would almost require a honky-tonk piano sound and style. If this were my song I would replace the piano with a honky-tonk piano, banjo or a banjo then fiddle lead, see David’s message. I would keep the guitar lead and end with another honky-tonk piano, fiddle, banjo or a fiddle then banjo lead. Please keep in mind that this is just me and you may or may not agree.

Regardless this is an excellent first attempt. Keep up the good work.


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