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Hi Brian, this is very good. I like the vox and the lyrics. This has a lot of potential IMHO.

If I could make a couple of suggestions they would be:
1-replace the lead instrument. IMO it is way to busy for this song. Something simpler, more melodic would be a better choice, for me anyway.

2-NEVER have a lead instrument competing with the lead vocal. When the singer(s) comes in they should be in the spotlight alone. In this version the lead fights with the vocals in a couple of places.

3-fix the ending

Again the above suggestions are something that I would do to this song. You and others may or may not agree.

I really do like this song and think it does have a ton of potential.



Hi MarioD
i thank you so very much for your honest opinions ,and i do agree with what you have said ,and also welcome your suggestions , it is difficult sometimes when one is too close to there own song ,and cant always see the wood for the trees,i will take note of what you have said,my very best wishes Brian