Wonderful rework. Really- that is so much better. The thing about it is this- yes it sounds better, but because the mix is more thoughtful, the SONG really comes through now. Now I understand the lyrics. Because mixing is kind of like cooking, where you can choose your ingrediants and mix them together any number of ways, it's always a good idea to keep in mind the finished dish. Will all the ingrediants you've mixed throughout make the finished dish the best it can be? Will the spices enhance the dish, or distract from it? More towards music- will the effects enhance the message, or distract from it? Will the balance of both vocalists compliment one another in such a way that the message still comes through? Will the arrangement get in the way of things, or will it breath and allow the message to come through without getting in the way? When there is much thought put into such things, this new mix happens- and it works wonderfully well. Everything comes together to present this song in a very poigniant way. The song- always service the song. That will almost always dictate what should and shouldn't happen within the mix and arragement.

That's an awful long way of saying this is right on guys. This is probably your best sounding work yet, and certainly a great tune as well.

A+ !

Dan