Paul,

just about everything on this works

- the octave apart piano parts in the intro

- the chug chug chug rthm gtr

- the little piano hook

etc

The lyrics are terrific and you put them across with great conviction and energy.

And a proper big ending this time too!


The only things I would have some reservations about are:
- the gtr solo: the sound and level are great, but to my ears anyway, parts of the solo (particularly the opening bars) are not a good fit for the song.

- I’m not sure that the key change is really required – this is such a strong piece anyway it doesn’t really need it.

Also, you’re coming in a tiny bit long for a pop song, at 4:40.

My suggestion would be to go round only once in the intro.

But Paul, this is absolutely brilliant.

Well done,

Marc