Hi Paul

I think you're being too hard on yourself 'cause (for my own taste at least) your song is a very well packaged tune. Like I was saying in another post, every level of the song works for me. Lyrics, your voice and the arrangement. The song as a lot of drive and is just in the right tone to accompany the subject and feeling it conveys. Really great job !

And as your were saying it's not easy to post songs here. Soon, I'll put some more jazz, but I'm also finishing a first song done with BIAB and when I hear what you've done and what Josie, Bob and Steve usually post, I'm having second thoughts...


Best of all and hope your day is a nice one

Pierre

IMac OSX 10.6.5 / latest BIAB
vista BIAB 2008