Hi Marc,

Thanks for the comments - can I book you to do all my future reviews?

Not sure what you mean about the vocal. I did push it a little to give it some "oomph" tho I'm sure your ears are better than mine. Maybe you could explain the "phasing" reference to this poor novice. I seem to remember getting that comment on my earlier posts last year!!

Now for that damn guitar!!
Josie and Bob seem to be of the same opinion and I have to confess I dithered over it a long while when I first recorded it.

But mostly my concern was the guitar part in the Bridge, which I had a feeling was too much. I think the problem with me was that I listened to it so many times I eventually got used to it.
But I think you are all correct - it has to go. Shoulda gone with my first instinct!!

I actually like the guitar in the Chorus, though maybe it could be a little lower in the mix. But I appreciate and consider all your comments so thank you for them and look forward to any you may make on future posts!

Sadly the lyric is entirely from the heart. And a broken one at that.
So a warning to all forum members.........there maybe a few more sad songs on the way. If nothing else, a broken heart inspires some prolific songwriting. Hey ho....every cloud!!

All the best and thanks again

Martin

Music is what feelings sound like.