Hi Jeff

That's an interesting chord progression and I liked the idea of having three different-sounding lead sections.

Can I venture some suggestions?

- On my headphones the mix sounds very muddy. The acoustic rhythm guitar panned right is very indistinct and would benefit from some EQ - try taking the bottom off as I think it's occupying the same frequency as the bass, which I couldn't pick out. Ditto for the acoustic guitar on the left.

- Your lead parts panned centre are not only overwhelmed by the boominess of the L and R rhythm guitar parts but they also have too much reverb and would benefit from some EQ - try adding some upper mids and highs - less reverb and some EQ tweaks will make them seem nearer as well as brighter and prominent, which is what they should be on a showcase like this.

- Leave some spaces in the lead work... There's a note on almost every single beat throughout - spaces and notes are both needed to make solos interesting!

John


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