I like it quite a bit.

1. There is a hum. You hear it at the start. Whack that hum.
2. Vocals, push them harder.

the harmonies are cool.

The bit around 3:00 is very realistic. I'd try to get that sound more often in your mix. Could even be a shorter version.

BUT WAIT: You were the new guy we tried to calm down and suddenly you post great music and you have over 1000 posts and are an EX-purt. Great going.

So if you were messing with things and there was no pg-music around, when would you have gotten a song like that this far?

John Conley
Musica est vita