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Lots of talk about song length. Here's the deal.
People ask me a lot "Where do your song ideas come from?"
My answer is always the same. "Songs are stories set to music. And a great place to get stories is from your life experiences. Remember though, that life isn't always happy. Sometimes it is sad. So when you tell a story in song about a sad event, the 'story' will be sad."
Okay, so THIS song is is a story, like any other I have written. It's a story about a relationship that went bad. I knew the girl for 2 years as a friend before we got together as a couple. She came from a HORRIBLE marriage to a Neanderthal who hurt her in every way possible, and I spent that whole 2 years explaining that I did not hurt he, HE did, and I wouldn't do that, and dwelling in past mistakes only keeps those bad times alive in your mind.
NOW go listen to the lyrics. Knowing the STORY, they make more sense. Now this story can not be told in one short verse and one chorus. It HAS to be the whole 5 minutes or it's like tearing the last page out of a book right at "....and the killer is...."
Here is the first verse, bridge and chorus.
I know that there were men before me Who didn’t really treat you well But it doesn’t really matter what happened before And it does you no good to dwell And I’ve proven it to you time and again That you could trust me with your love And I promised you I’d never hurt you that way But that was something you weren't quite sure of
And you never understood That the past is the past And I’ll give you a love You can count on to last Tell me what do I have to do?
I’ve been tellin’ you now for over 2 years That everything you need is standing right here in front of you If you’d only let me through I know you built a wall to guard your heart And I'll tell you again what I said at the start But you need to believe it’s true I’m the one for you
Verse 2 if after the dumping, how I felt duped and used.
For a time you really had me believin’ That this was more than just a fling That maybe you really cared about me And I’d finally found the real thing But as time passed by it was clearer each day That you really didn’t care at all Still I took a real chance and I gave you my heart Even knowing I was risking a fall
And you never believed That my love was for real That there wasn’t anything I was tryin’ to conceal Tell me what do I have to do?
I’ve been tellin’ you now for over 2 years That everything you need is standing right here in front of you If you’d only let me through I know you built a wall to guard your heart And I'll tell you again what I said at the start But you need to believe it’s true I’m the one for you
After the solos, I am talking to her explaining how badly she hurt me.
And it hurt me so bad When you sent me away I never really thought You’d treat me that way Tell me what do I have to do?
Now, could I really take ANY of that out and still tell the whole story? Music world stuffed shirt penguins demanding 3:43 songs or not, I can not tell the story without all the verses.
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Band-in-a-Box User Video Tutorials!
If you've reviewed our Support page, you've probably noticed the Videos page, which separates our Band-in-a-Box® tutorial videos by category: Overview, VST DAW Plugin, Setup, Beginner, Intermediate, Advanced, and there's even an Archive category to go down memory lane... (You'll also find these videos on our YouTube Channel.)
It's always great to hear how other Band-in-a-Box® users create their songs, especially when they explain in detail what they're doing. Like Henry Clarke's YouTube Channel, Henry Clarke - Senior Musicians Unite! There you'll find his ALL Band-in-a-Box Tutorials playlist with over 50 videos! His top-three most watched videos include "How to Get Started with Band-in-a-Box," "How I use the Audio Chord Wizard in Band-in-a-Box," and "How to Create An Effective Solo Using Band-in-a-Box" - however he touches on many other topics and also demonstrates his own Band-in-a-Box® songs in the Band-in-a-Box Created Songs playlist!
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Video: Making a Song with Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V
Take your Band-in-a-Box® project to a whole new level when you incorporate ChatGPT and Synth V to add lyrics and vocals to your song!
We wanted to demonstrate how this is done with our video, where we show you how to go from nothing to a finished "radio ready" modern pop song by combining the features of Band-in-a-Box®, ChatGPT, and Synth V!
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