A fun song! I liked you very loose rhymes.

Small nit: when you brought the harmony up at the end, it sounded robotic. Putting it in the background (like on the other verses) draws less attention to it.

Nicely done - it's a great match to the style.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?