Dan,
I'll give some of my opinion. I think you suffer from a little bit of the same as me. We are live players and thus recording is a whole new thing, sort of.
So my comments:
1. Don't use pitch correction-that's the odd sound to the voice you hear.
2. Panning as mentioned is skewed-easy does it as Eddie says
3. Guitar and sax a little too out front
4. sax is dry compared to the rest-sounds live except the sax
One other thing that is really just a preference in production. I'd like to hear the piano comping in the beginning were you're playing melody.

John
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