I posted this to the showcase for general songwriting feedback but I would like critical feedback on mixing this for live performance and I know you don't all frequent the Users Showcase.

I wrote this for an elementary school choir and it will be performed in the gym.

There are links to two tracks, one with vocals and one without. The vox are mine and recorded to see how the lyrics play out. My daughter will be recording a version later that the school kids can better identify with.


Saying Goodbye with lyrics

Saying Goodbye backing tracks