John:
A case of move over Tom Waits . . .
. . . . nor does Time, for that matter.

Seems that the critique questions are purely at the request of the poster.
What do you want to know?
Do you know how to step back and listen to your work as a third person?

As for me, if I've written and framed what I think is a good tune, and since my
hearing is buggy to say the least, I might be tempted to ask the forum "what am
I missing?" Someone might say I'm flat, someone else I'm missing a bridge,
someone might suggest I rewrite the melody. It's all been said here before,
since and pre-dating the User forum.

Cheers lads


Ian
My "Original Tunes" Site
My gene pool needs more chlorine.