Bob,

I've gotta agree with Kevin, David and Mike on your vocals. The timing is "unsettling", "jarring" and "bothersome". It makes it difficult to even get through the whole song.

It gives the impression to the listener that you're totally unaware of where the beat actually falls.

Josie's vocals are very good on the second verse and and her timing is also very good.

I tried twice to listen to the whole song and I had to stop it early in the third verse when you started singing again after Josie's vocal.

If you re-sing it in the proper time, I'd say it would be a very nice song.

The guitar work on the parts I was able to listen to was good.

Bob
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