First Ain't No Love Goin' On Here Tonight and now this.

Tim, I worry about you!!

Seriously, I find it hard to comment on a lyric alone without the musical context, but this is clearly hard-hitting stuff (V2!!)


My re-write of the chorus section would read something like this:
So where does love (it) go?
What does it become?
when (why ?) did it stop
and leave me so numb?
Yes where does love (it) go?
What does it become?
when (why ?) did it stop
and leave me so numb?

..but this may or may not fit with the musical structure(s) you have in mind Tim.

Take care (and write a cheerful one some time soon!),

Marc