Pretty intro and ending sections !

Maybe the vox need to be up a touch in the mix. In the vox, some words seem to ‘tail off’ (used/abused/…)

Also, in the break @ 0:57 the gtr playing the hook needs to be brought forward.

In fact, why not just go straight into v2 ?

To my ears, the whole thing is maybe a bit long, which I would attribute to the repetition of the bridge section ‘you can say what you want‘ at 3:10.

Good work, Rob and thanks for posting.

Marc